记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和冗长。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn new words or articles, I can remember them for a short time but often forget them after a few hours. Therefore, I usually write things down to help me remember.

建议: 回答中语法和表达混乱，信息不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和词汇，并补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last week I forgot my little brother's birthday and didn't buy him a gift. I felt really sorry about it.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明，并注意句子结构的完整和连贯。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to buy things my mother asks for. However, I often forget what to buy when I am at the shop, so I write a shopping list to help me remember.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但有语法和表达上的小错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的准确性。

示例: I usually use the Notes app on my phone to remember important things in my daily life. For example, if I have several tasks to complete today, I write them down and check them off when I finish each one.

× I'm not good at memory things.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。

× when I resign the article or the words

✓ when I revise the article or the words

'resign'是辞职的意思，应该用'revise'表示复习。

× I always write down thing to help me.

✓ I always write things down to help me.

'thing'应为复数'things'，且短语顺序应为'write things down'。

× for examples my I always forget my my little brother's birthdays last week.

✓ For example, I always forget my little brother's birthday last week.

'for examples'应为单数形式'for example'，'birthdays'应为单数'birthday'。

× He just go through he his birthdays but I forget to buy he's a person.

✓ He just had his birthday but I forgot to buy him a present.

句中代词使用错误，'he'应为'he had'，'he's a person'应为'give him a present'。

× I feel so so.

✓ I feel so sorry.

'so so'用法不当，应使用表达遗憾的'adjective'如'sorry'。

× when I in the shop

✓ when I am in the shop

缺少动词'am'，导致句子结构不完整。

× I always write down to help me remember that I the some something I need.

✓ I always write down something to help me remember what I need.

句子结构混乱，'the some something'错误，应简化为'something'。

× I usually use the Notes app in the on the phone to help me remember important things in our day in my daily life.

✓ I usually use the Notes app on my phone to help me remember important things in my daily life.

'in the on the phone'重复且错误，应为'on my phone'。

× I will write down on my phone is when I finish it.

✓ I will write it down on my phone when I finish it.

句子结构错误，'is'多余，应调整为正确的时间状语从句。