记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复表达（"do do"），句子结构较为简单且断裂，缺少连贯的连接词。建议避免重复，使用更自然流畅的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I'm not very quick at memorising things, but I perform well with short-term memory. For example, before exams, I can spend one night memorising all the material and do well in the test.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复（"my my"），表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议注意语法时态一致，避免重复，并用连接词使叙述更连贯。

示例: Yes, I often forget the date and time of important meetings. For instance, once when a meeting started, my roommates messaged me asking why I wasn't there.

建议: 回答中有词汇使用错误（"live trucks"应为"life tasks"或类似表达），句子结构不够清晰，缺少连接词。建议使用准确词汇，理清句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I need to remember work-related things such as my daily schedule, including meetings with mentors or friends. Besides that, I also have to keep track of daily tasks like shopping or going out with friends.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误（"cited as a reminder"不正确），表达稍显重复，缺少连接词。建议改正语法错误，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免重复。

示例: I usually write important things on sticky notes and place them somewhere visible. Alternatively, I set reminders on my phone, which notify me the next day. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me.

× I can use one night to memorize all of the contents and finish the exam well.

✓ I can use one night to memorize all of the contents and finish the exam well.

该句中没有明显的过去时错误，'can'表示能力，'use'和'finish'是一般现在时，符合语境，无需修改。

× Of course, you know I always forgot the day, the time of some important meetings.

✓ Of course, you know I always forget the day, the time of some important meetings.

这里描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时，'forgot'是过去时，错误地表达了习惯性动作。应改为'forget'。

× And yet there is one time not only when the meeting began, my my roommates sent me the message that oh, why you are not here.

✓ And there was one time when the meeting began, my roommates sent me a message saying, "Oh, why are you not here?"

句子结构混乱，'not only'用法不当，且时态应为过去时。应调整句子结构，使其清晰且符合语法。

× Well, I think some work things like my daily schedule including some meeting or with mentors or friends and also some live trucks like buying something or going out with friends.

✓ Well, I think of some work things like my daily schedule including some meetings with mentors or friends and also some life tasks like buying something or going out with friends.

'think some work things'缺少介词，应为'think of some work things'；'meeting or with mentors'结构不完整，应为'meetings with mentors'；'live trucks'应为'life tasks'。需要调整介词和词汇。

× Well I usually write them down on the sticker notes and put them in somewhere I can definitely see.

✓ Well, I usually write them down on sticky notes and put them somewhere I can definitely see.

'sticker notes'应为'sticky notes'；'put them in somewhere'中'in'多余，应去掉。

× Or I will write on my phone and cited as a reminder.

✓ Or I will write it on my phone and set it as a reminder.

'write on my phone'缺少宾语，应加'it'；'cited'用词错误，应为'set'表示设置提醒。

× Then the next day it will remind me about it or I will just tell my friends to remind me.

✓ Then the next day, it will remind me about it or I will just tell my friends to remind me.

该句无明显代词错误，但加逗号更符合书面表达。