记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar, avoiding repetition, and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clearer example.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget small tasks. For example, when my mother gives me a list of five grocery items, I usually forget one or two due to my poor memory.

建议: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to explain the situation logically. Also, correct vocabulary like 'patrol' to 'petrol'.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times. For instance, while travelling to Srisailam temple, I forgot to fill my car's petrol. After driving about 150 kilometres, the fuel indicator started blinking, which made me realise my mistake.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the tasks.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to feed my dog three times a day. However, sometimes I forget and feed it only twice. Besides that, I also have to remember to go outside and buy grocery items such as milk, sugar, and tea packets.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

示例: Since I have a poor memory, I write important things on a paper and carry it with me when I go outside. Also, when I am at home, I use a notice board to remind me to complete tasks on time. Therefore, having lists helps me remember important things.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I often forgot the small small tasks which need to be performed.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I often forget the small small tasks which need to be performed.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead.

× Example when my mom told me to go to grocery store and bring some things and she will give a list of items among five, I will forgot one or two due to the poor memory.

✓ For example, when my mom tells me to go to the grocery store and bring some things, and she gives me a list of five items, I forget one or two due to poor memory.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'To grocery store' should be 'to the grocery store'. Also, 'among five' is unclear; 'a list of five items' is clearer. The verb tenses are adjusted to present to match habitual action.

× Yes, many times I have forgotten important things.

✓ Yes, many times I have forgotten important things.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× While I was traveling to the Srisailam temple, I forgot to fill my car patrol after going far from my home, around 150 kilometers, the indicator was blinking, has a low fuel.

✓ While I was traveling to the Srisailam temple, I forgot to fill my car petrol. After going far from my home, around 150 kilometers, the indicator was blinking, showing low fuel.

The sentence has tense and word choice issues. 'Patrol' should be 'petrol'. The sentence is long and confusing; splitting it improves clarity. 'Has a low fuel' is incorrect; 'showing low fuel' is appropriate.

× At that time I felt I might.

✓ At that time, I felt I might run out of fuel.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'run out of fuel' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes I forgot and feed feed it 2 times only and other tasks like going to the outside and bringing grocery items like milk, sugar and tea packet.

✓ Sometimes I forget and feed it only twice, and other tasks like going outside and bringing grocery items like milk, sugar, and tea packets.

'Forgot' should be 'forget' to indicate habitual action. 'Feed feed' is a repetition error. '2 times' is better expressed as 'twice'. 'Going to the outside' should be 'going outside'. 'Tea packet' should be plural 'tea packets' to match the list.

× As I have a poor memory, I list out the important things in a paper and carry with me while I'm going outside.

✓ As I have poor memory, I list the important things on a paper and carry it with me when I go outside.

'List out' is better as 'list'. 'In a paper' should be 'on a paper'. 'Carry with me' needs an object, so 'carry it with me' is correct. 'While I'm going outside' is better as 'when I go outside' for clarity.

× If I'm doing any task in the inside, I have a notice board to make me remind that task should be completed in in time.

✓ If I'm doing any task inside, I have a notice board to remind me that the task should be completed on time.

'In the inside' is incorrect; 'inside' alone suffices. 'Make me remind' should be 'remind me'. 'In in time' is a repetition and should be 'on time'.

× So always having a list make me to memorize the important.

✓ So, always having a list helps me to remember important things.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Make me to memorize' should be 'helps me to remember'. 'The important' is incomplete; 'important things' is clearer.