记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Oh it's hard to say. Most of time I'm good at memorizing the important things, but I usually forget the small things in my daily life.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Well, actually I really forget the important things, but I remember once during the CET 6 examination, I forgot to prepare a spare pen in the examination. So it's a it was a big fault.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
That's easy. Every day there are different things I need to do, so I just write them on my phone to remind me so that I can remind them in my daily life.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
Well, just like what I said before, I will write them on my phone, but if they are very important I will write them one more time.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更流畅自然。
示例: I think I'm quite good at remembering important things, but I often forget minor details in my daily life.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和句式，避免重复和语法错误。
示例: Yes, I once forgot to bring a spare pen during the CET 6 exam, which caused me some trouble.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答内容重复且表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复同一信息。
示例: I usually have many tasks each day, so I write reminders on my phone to keep track of them.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中重复前文内容，缺乏丰富细节。建议增加具体细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。
示例: I write important things on my phone, and if they are very important, I write them twice to make sure I don't forget.
语法
× Well, actually I really forget the important things, but I remember once during the CET 6 examination, I forgot to prepare a spare pen in the examination.
✓ Well, actually I really forgot the important things, but I remember once during the CET 6 examination, I forgot to prepare a spare pen in the examination.
这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词应该用过去式。forget的过去式是forgot。
× Most of time I'm good at memorizing the important things, but I usually forget the small things in my daily life.
✓ Most of the time I'm good at memorizing the important things, but I usually forget the small things in my daily life.
短语中缺少定冠词“the”，正确表达是“Most of the time”，表示大多数时间。
× so I just write them on my phone to remind me so that I can remind them in my daily life.
✓ so I just write them on my phone to remind myself so that I can remember them in my daily life.
这里“remind me”应改为“remind myself”，因为是自己提醒自己；后半句“remind them”应改为“remember them”，因为是记住事情。
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