记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use correct tense consistently. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things nowadays because I have many responsibilities like studies and work. However, when I was a child, it was easier to remember things as I had fewer tasks to focus on.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'he has my vote'. Try to speak clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid hesitation sounds like 'he he'. Use linking words to make your story coherent.

示例: Yes, once I forgot my watch at the university campus, which made me very worried. Fortunately, my friend found it and promised to return it to me the next day.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes like 'have wrote'. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases like 'and etcetera'. Be more specific and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks such as school assignments and projects. Additionally, I write down promises I have made to others to ensure I keep them.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correct verb forms, for example, 'feed it in my phone' should be 'save it on my phone'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down on paper or saving them on my phone. Whenever I have free time, I review these notes to remind myself of my tasks.

× Honestly speaking, I was not too good at memorizing things because I have a lot of work to do.

✓ Honestly speaking, I was not too good at memorizing things because I had a lot of work to do.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'have'. Since the context is past, 'have' should be changed to past tense 'had' to maintain tense consistency.

× But earlier when I was a child, I don't have too much responsibility.

✓ But earlier when I was a child, I didn't have too many responsibilities.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'don't have' instead of past tense 'didn't have' and 'too much responsibility' should be plural 'too many responsibilities' because it refers to countable tasks.

× So that time it was easy for me to memorize the things.

✓ So at that time, it was easy for me to memorize things.

The phrase 'that time' should be preceded by 'at' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'the things' is unnecessary; 'things' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, one day I have forgotten my watch at the university campus.

✓ Yes, one day I forgot my watch at the university campus.

The present perfect tense 'have forgotten' is incorrect here because the action happened at a specific time in the past. Simple past 'forgot' is appropriate.

× I was very worried about that time.

✓ I was very worried at that time.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; 'at that time' is the correct phrase to indicate a specific time in the past.

× But then after some time my friend called me and said that he has he he has my vote and he he will return me tomorrow.

✓ But then after some time, my friend called me and said that he has my watch and he will return it to me tomorrow.

The sentence has repetition errors and incorrect word 'vote' instead of 'watch'. Also, 'return me' is incorrect; it should be 'return it to me'.

× I have also wrote down things like the promises I have made to other person and etcetera.

✓ I have also written down things like the promises I have made to other people, etc.

The verb 'wrote' is past tense; after 'have' it should be past participle 'written'. 'Other person' should be plural 'other people'. 'Etcetera' is better abbreviated as 'etc.' and preceded by a comma.

× I remember important things by writing it down on the paper or sometimes feed it in my phone so that whenever I get a time I usually go through it and remember the things I have to do.

✓ I remember important things by writing them down on paper or sometimes feeding them into my phone so that whenever I get time, I usually go through it and remember the things I have to do.

'Writing it down on the paper' should be 'writing them down on paper' because 'things' is plural and 'paper' is uncountable without 'the'. 'Feed it in my phone' should be 'feeding them into my phone'. 'Get a time' is incorrect; 'get time' is correct.