记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often stay up late to finish my homework. As a result, my memory has worsened. For example, I sometimes forget important deadlines because I'm too tired.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa như 'I lost a very, very much knowledge'.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my schedule to attend my chess club meeting, which made me miss valuable practice time.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác các từ.

示例: Every day, I need to remember several tasks such as attending my classes, finishing my homework, cooking meals, and doing the laundry. These are important parts of my daily routine.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng những câu không tự nhiên như 'The worry that I used to remember'. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ cách bạn ghi nhớ.

示例: To remember important things, I usually take notes on my phone or set alarms as reminders. For example, I set an alarm to remind me to submit my assignments on time.

× I'll say no because I usually stay up late to finish my exercise.

✓ I'll say no because I usually stay up late to finish my exercises.

The word 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple tasks or assignments, not a single one. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× there are so many signs when it's a sign that the teacher give to me.

✓ there are so many signs when it's a sign that the teacher gives to me.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the third person singular subject 'teacher'. This is a third person singular issue (ID 2).

× That is the reason that I my memory is decreased significantly.

✓ That is the reason why my memory has decreased significantly.

The original sentence has a structural error and missing words. 'That is the reason why my memory has decreased significantly' is correct. 'Has decreased' is present perfect tense to indicate a change over time. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context.

× there are a lot of things that I forgot and it is very important.

✓ there are a lot of things that I forgot and they are very important.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× Like I forgot my schedule to go to my chess club.

✓ Like I forgot my schedule to go to my chess club.

No correction needed; 'forgot' is correctly used in past tense.

× So I lost a very, very much knowledge.

✓ So I lost a lot of knowledge.

'Knowledge' is an uncountable noun and cannot be quantified with 'a very, very much'. The correct quantifier is 'a lot of'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× In a day, there are so many thing that I have to remember,

✓ In a day, there are so many things that I have to remember,

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'so many'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× like I have to remember go to to go to my class or to finish my homework or like cook or do the washings.

✓ like I have to remember to go to my class or to finish my homework or to cook or do the washing.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb. Also, 'washings' is incorrect; 'washing' is the correct noun. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and singular/plural issue (ID 1).

× The worry that I used to remember important things is I will take note on my phone or like I will set an alarm to Remember Me that I have to do that thing.

✓ The way that I use to remember important things is I will take notes on my phone or I will set an alarm to remind me that I have to do that thing.

'Worry' should be 'way'. 'Take note' should be 'take notes'. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me'. These are incorrect word choices and pronoun usage (ID 12).

× So I have to do this thing, yeah.

✓ So I have to do this thing, yeah.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.