记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“memory span only 7 second”应为“memory span of only 7 seconds”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时注意语法准确性。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget important dates or where I put my keys, which can be quite frustrating.

建议: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，如“lose my phone a lot of time”应为“lose my phone many times”，且“some reminder to reminders”表达重复。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

示例: I have never forgotten anything very important, but I often lose my phone because my memory is poor. Therefore, I use reminders on my phone to help me remember things.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清，缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题，提供具体内容，并使用连贯的句子。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule and important appointments. I am also trying to improve my memory by practicing regularly.

建议: 回答简洁但缺少细节，且有语法错误，如“reminder”应为“reminders”，“important appointment”应为“important appointments”。建议丰富内容并注意语法。

示例: I usually use reminders on my phone to help me remember important appointments and tasks.

× I think I'm not very good at memorizing things because some of my friends often joke that I have a memory span only 7 second.

✓ I think I'm not very good at memorizing things because some of my friends often joke that I have a memory span of only 7 seconds.

这里的'second'应该用复数形式'seconds'，因为表示时间长度时，数字大于1需要用复数形式。

× Until now I have never forgotten something so important, but I lose my phone a lot of time because my memory is too terrible.

✓ Until now I have never forgotten something so important, but I have lost my phone many times because my memory is too terrible.

这里描述过去发生的动作，应该用现在完成时'have lost'，而且'lose'的过去分词是'lost'。'a lot of time'用法不当，应该用'many times'表示多次。

× Until now I have never forgotten something so important, but I lose my phone a lot of time because my memory is too terrible.

✓ Until now I have never forgotten something so important, but I have lost my phone many times because my memory is too terrible.

'a lot of time'通常指大量时间，不适合表示次数，表示多次应该用'many times'。

× So now I use some reminder to reminders on my phone and to remember something.

✓ So now I use some reminders on my phone to remember things.

'reminder'应使用复数形式'reminders'，且句子结构不清晰，改为'...use some reminders on my phone to remember things'更通顺。

× I usually use reminder on my phone to avoid forgetting important appointment.

✓ I usually use reminders on my phone to avoid forgetting important appointments.

'reminder'和'appointment'都应使用复数形式，表示多个提醒和多个重要的约会。

× I usually use reminder on my phone to avoid forgetting important appointment.

✓ I usually use reminders on my phone to avoid forgetting important appointments.

缺少复数形式，'reminder'和'appointment'应改为复数形式。

× I must remember the time of my works and I just improve my memory now.

✓ I must remember the time of my work and I am just improving my memory now.

'works'通常指作品，表示工作时用'unucountable'的'work'。另外，'just improve'应改为现在进行时'am just improving'表示正在进行的动作。

× I must remember the time of my works and I just improve my memory now.

✓ I must remember the time of my work and I am just improving my memory now.

'just improve'应使用现在进行时态，表示正在进行的动作。