记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but it lacks natural flow and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying "I don't remember anything," you can say "I often forget things." Also, avoid repeating words like "at times" twice. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important appointments or schedules. This sometimes causes me to miss meetings or other commitments.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things such as appointments with my teacher or doctor. Sometimes, I also miss important meetings or phone calls because of this.

建议: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, "walking up early" should be "waking up early." Also, try to use linking words like "for instance" or "moreover" to connect your ideas.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. For instance, I must focus on my work and studies to be productive. Moreover, maintaining a healthy lifestyle by waking up early and taking care of my niece is also very important to me.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking. Use simple and clear sentences. Explain your strategies for remembering things with examples and linking words.

示例: I remember important things by using certain strategies. For example, I try to maintain a healthy lifestyle and stay responsible. Also, I make lists or set reminders to help me remember important tasks.

× No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't remember anything and sometime I missed any important things like appointment schedules at times.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't remember anything and sometimes I miss important things like appointment schedules.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'Missed' should be 'miss' to match the present tense context. 'Any important things' should be 'important things' without 'any' because 'any' is not used in affirmative sentences here.

× No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't remember anything and sometime I missed any important things like appointment schedules at times.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't remember anything and sometimes I miss important things like appointment schedules.

The verb 'missed' is in past tense but the sentence context is present tense, so it should be 'miss' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I have been forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor and also sometimes I often forget my important meeting and my important call attended.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor, and also sometimes I often forget my important meetings and important calls attended.

The phrase 'have been forgotten' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'have forgotten'. Also, 'meeting' and 'call' should be plural to match 'important' and the context.

× Yes, I have been forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor and also sometimes I often forget my important meeting and my important call attended.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor, and also sometimes I often forget my important meetings and important calls attended.

'Meeting' and 'call' should be plural ('meetings' and 'calls') because the context implies multiple instances.

× Yes, I have been forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor and also sometimes I often forget my important meeting and my important call attended.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important like appointment schedules, time schedules with a teacher and doctor, and also sometimes I often forget my important meetings and important calls attended.

The phrase 'call attended' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'important calls attended' or rephrased for clarity. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list.

× In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. For example, I must focus on my work and study to be productive. Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle such as waking up or walking up early in the morning and take care of my child niece is also important to me.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. For example, I must focus on my work and study to be productive. Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle such as waking up or getting up early in the morning and taking care of my child niece is also important to me.

The phrase 'walking up early' is incorrect; it should be 'getting up early'. Also, 'take care' should be 'taking care' to maintain parallel structure with 'waking up'.

× Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle such as waking up or walking up early in the morning and take care of my child niece is also important to me.

✓ Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle such as waking up or getting up early in the morning and taking care of my child niece is also important to me.

After 'such as', verbs should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallelism. 'Take care' should be 'taking care'.

× I remember important things are for several way.

✓ I remember important things in several ways.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper preposition 'in' and plural 'ways' to express the idea clearly.

× Actually I when I I think that and Remember Remember important things that time I follow my my strategy like to maintain maintain lifestyle, hard work, responsibility and so on.

✓ Actually, when I think about and remember important things, I follow my strategy like maintaining a healthy lifestyle, hard work, responsibility, and so on.

The original sentence has repeated words and unclear structure. The correction removes repetitions and clarifies the sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms.