记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "brain activities, brain teaser activities" and improve grammar by saying "help me increase my memory power" instead of "help me increasing". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things because I regularly do brain teasers, which help me increase my memory power.

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly awkward. Try to make it more natural by simplifying the sentence and using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'completely engrossed in the examination itself'.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my car keys at home because I was rushing for an examination and my mind was fully focused on it.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors like 'you just involve my day day-to-day chores'. Try to be more specific and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'not much which requires me to remember stuff'.

示例: In my daily life, I usually need to remember the agenda of meetings for my job. Apart from that, my routine chores don't require much memorising.

建议: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'might help me remember' and 'acts as a way'.

示例: I usually rely on my memory to remember important things; however, sometimes I use tools like notes or lists to stay organised.

× I perform certain brain activities, brain teaser activities that help me increasing my memory power.

✓ I perform certain brain activities, brain teaser activities that help me increase my memory power.

The verb 'help' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'help me increasing' is incorrect; it should be 'help me increase'. This is a common error with verbs of perception or causation.

× There was a time when I had forgotten my car keys in my apartment where while I was rushing for an examination as my mind was completely engrossed in the examination itself.

✓ There was a time when I had forgotten my car keys in my apartment while I was rushing for an examination as my mind was completely engrossed in the examination itself.

The word 'where' is incorrectly used here. It is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing 'where' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× but other than that you just involve my day day-to-day chores.

✓ but other than that, I just involve myself in my day-to-day chores.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you' and lacks the reflexive pronoun needed with 'involve'. The correct form is 'I just involve myself', using the reflexive pronoun to indicate the subject acting on itself.

× but other than that you just involve my day day-to-day chores.

✓ but other than that, I just involve myself in my day-to-day chores.

The verb 'involve' requires the preposition 'in' when indicating participation in activities. Also, 'day day-to-day' is a repetition error; it should be 'day-to-day'. This correction addresses both issues.

× I usually try to use only my memory power to remember things, but there are times where I might need the help of tools such as notes or lists which might help me remember stuff and also acts as a way where I can be organized on what I need to remember.

✓ I usually try to use only my memory power to remember things, but there are times when I might need the help of tools such as notes or lists which might help me remember stuff and also act as a way for me to be organized on what I need to remember.

The phrase 'times where' should be 'times when' because 'when' is used for time references. Also, 'acts' should be 'act' to agree with the plural subject 'notes or lists'. Additionally, 'organized on' is incorrect; 'organized about' or 'organized regarding' would be better, but 'for me to be organized on' is acceptable here.