记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and coherence. Try to avoid short, incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I work at the hospital, I need to remember patient reports and their medical history because this helps me give the correct medicine and understand their anatomy better.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and is incomplete. Use correct verb forms and complete sentences. Also, explain why forgetting is bad to add more detail and coherence.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For instance, I once forgot to give medicine to a patient, which was very serious because as a doctor, I must be very careful to ensure patients get the right treatment.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas logically. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, so I use a notepad to write down important tasks. This helps me organize my work and personal life more effectively.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to use varied vocabulary and complete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in my notepad. Whenever I check it, I can plan my day properly, which has helped me stay organized and focused.

× Yes, I forgotten something important sometimes.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important sometimes.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Without 'have', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Use 'have forgotten' to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time before now.

× Sometimes I forget to give medicine to the patient and which is really bad things because as a doctor this is not.

✓ Sometimes I forget to give medicine to the patient, and this is really a bad thing because as a doctor this is not acceptable.

The phrase 'bad things' is incorrect because it refers to a singular situation. It should be 'a bad thing' to match the singular context. Also, 'which' is incorrectly used; 'this' is more appropriate to refer to the previous clause. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I need to make a keep in mind in different things.

✓ I need to keep in mind different things.

The phrase 'make a keep in mind' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep in mind' without 'make a'. Also, 'in different things' is better expressed as 'different things' without the preposition 'in'.

× And this is helped me a lot and this has helped me also special.

✓ And this has helped me a lot and has also helped me especially.

The phrase 'this is helped me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'this has helped me' using present perfect tense. Also, 'special' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'especially' is needed to modify the verb 'helped'.