记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中时态使用不准确，应该使用一般现在时而非过去时；表达略显重复且不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免冗余，并注意时态一致。

示例: I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to be forgetful and careless. For instance, I often struggle to remember phone numbers shortly after hearing them.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“vividly record”不合适，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达事件，并注意语法和连贯性。

示例: Yes, I clearly remember that last summer holiday I lost my iPhone. It was very important to me because it was a special gift from my grandpa.

建议: 回答内容表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑关系。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

示例: In daily life, I need to remember important things like homework deadlines and to bring electronic devices to school. These help me study and complete my assignments on time.

建议: 回答中表达不够自然，部分短语使用不当，如“telling my mind by heart”和“hard evidence”。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

示例: There are several ways I remember important things. For example, I try to repeat them in my mind to memorize, and I also write them down so I can check later if I forget.

× Personally speaking, I had incredibly poor memory.

✓ Personally speaking, I have incredibly poor memory.

这里描述的是现在的记忆状况，应该用现在完成时或一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× I often struggle to remember the phone number shortly after hearing them.

✓ I often struggle to remember phone numbers shortly after hearing them.

phone number是可数名词，复数形式应为phone numbers，与代词them保持一致。

× Wow, I vividly record.

✓ Wow, I vividly remember.

record用法不当，表达记忆应使用remember，且时态应为一般现在时或过去时，根据上下文选择。

× Last summer holiday I lost an iPhone, which is quite important to me because this is my.

✓ Last summer holiday I lost an iPhone, which was quite important to me because it was my

时态应保持一致，描述过去事件用过去时，且this指代不明确，应改为it。

× Important gift that's given by my grandpa.

✓ an important gift that was given to me by my grandpa.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且冠词缺失，需补充完整句子结构。

× In our daily life, there are numerous important things to carry on, For example, the homework, that extension for the students to bring it to the school and then to submit it online on time, and also the electronic device so that we can use it to research and to learn the new things.

✓ In our daily life, there are numerous important things to carry out. For example, homework, extensions for students to bring to school and then submit online on time, and also electronic devices so that we can use them to research and learn new things.

homework是不可数名词，不用the；extension应为extensions复数；electronic device应为devices复数；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I can keep telling my mind by heart so that I will not forget, and also I can write it down so it's a hard evidence.

✓ I can keep telling myself by heart so that I will not forget, and also I can write it down so it's hard evidence.

tell my mind用法错误，应为tell myself；hard evidence前不加冠词；by heart表示“凭记忆”，用法正确。