记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'you affect techniques' nên là 'using effective techniques'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: No, I wasn't very good at memorizing things in the past because I often forgot what I learned. However, after practicing regularly and using effective techniques like repetition, my memory has improved significantly. For example, repeating information several times helped me retain it better.

建议: Bạn trả lời tốt với nội dung rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu 'set reminder' nên là 'set reminders' để đúng ngữ pháp số nhiều. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot the deadline for my homework because I was very busy with other school activities. This caused me some problems at school, but now I always set reminders to avoid forgetting important tasks.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'though relate' nên là 'that relate', 'exercise scene' không rõ nghĩa, và 'to at far forget them' không đúng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: In my daily life, I usually take notes and make detailed plans to help me remember important tasks, especially those related to my homework and extra lessons. For example, on Mondays I have a sports class and need to submit my homework by 9:00 PM, so I write down this deadline in my plan to make sure I don't forget it.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ như 'walked down the deadline' không đúng, nên là 'wrote down the deadline'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và kiểm tra lại câu để tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: I usually remember important things by taking notes and reviewing them regularly. This method helps me stay organized and make sure I don't forget important tasks. For example, last Friday I finished my homework on time because I wrote down the deadline and reviewed my notes several times before submitting it.

× However, after practicing regularly and you affect techniques like repetition and my memory has improved significantly.

✓ However, after practicing regularly and using effective techniques like repetition, my memory has improved significantly.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and you affect' which is not a proper conjunction or phrase here. The correct phrase should be 'and using effective' to connect the ideas properly and make the sentence grammatically correct.

× but now I always set reminder to avoid forgetting important tasks.

✓ but now I always set reminders to avoid forgetting important tasks.

The noun 'reminder' is countable and should be pluralized as 'reminders' when used in a general sense. Omitting the plural form causes a quantifier error.

× especially though relate to my homework and extra lessons.

✓ especially those related to my homework and extra lessons.

The phrase 'though relate to' is incorrect. The correct preposition and relative pronoun are 'those related to' to properly link the phrase to the noun it describes.

× so I write down this deadline in my plan to at far forget them.

✓ so I write down this deadline in my plan to not forget it.

The phrase 'to at far forget them' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'to not forget it' to express the purpose of writing down the deadline clearly and grammatically.

× because I walked down the deadline and review my notes several times before submitting it.

✓ because I wrote down the deadline and reviewed my notes several times before submitting it.

The phrase 'walked down the deadline' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'wrote down'. Also, the verb 'review' should be in past tense 'reviewed' to match the past tense context of the sentence.