记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如"a significant"应为"are significant"，"kisses"应为"causes"。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性，同时避免冗长句子，保持表达简洁自然。

示例: I am good at memorising important things like project deadlines and exam dates, but I often forget trivial details, which sometimes causes inconvenience in my life.

建议: 回答结构清晰，但"prepare some Plan B"表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达，如"make backup plans"。此外，可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Not really, because I usually make backup plans to avoid forgetting important things, and I also ask my parents to remind me of significant events.

建议: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议注意冠词使用，如"my parents' phone number"，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

示例: There are many things I need to remember, such as my parents' phone number, my ID number, and my family members' birthdays. However, I think the most important is my ID number because in China, you need it to access certain surveys.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I use to"应为"I used to"，且表达略显重复。建议简化表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I used to set reminders to remember important things, but this method didn't work well because I often ignored them while playing video games or doing homework. Therefore, now I ask my parents to remind me.

× I can easily memorize things that a significant to me, such as the deadline of my projects and the dates of examination, but for some trivial I often forget about them, which sometimes kisses some inconvenience in my life.

✓ I can easily memorize things that are significant to me, such as the deadlines of my projects and the dates of examinations, but for some trivial things I often forget about them, which sometimes causes some inconvenience in my life.

这里'significant'前缺少动词'are'，导致句子结构不完整；'deadline'和'date'应使用复数形式'deadlines'和'dates'，因为指多个项目和考试日期；'some trivial'缺少名词，应为'some trivial things'；'kisses'用词错误，应为'causes'，表示引起不便。

× I can easily memorize things that a significant to me, such as the deadline of my projects and the dates of examination, but for some trivial I often forget about them, which sometimes kisses some inconvenience in my life.

✓ I can easily memorize things that are significant to me, such as the deadlines of my projects and the dates of examinations, but for some trivial things I often forget about them, which sometimes causes some inconvenience in my life.

句中缺少动词'are'，这是动词的现在时形式，连接主语和表语，缺失导致句子不完整。

× I use to set some reminders to remind me of them.

✓ I used to set some reminders to remind me of them.

这里应使用过去时态的'modal verb'结构，'used to'表示过去常做某事，'use to'是不正确的表达。

× However, this method was proven useless because I often ignored those reminders when I was playing video games or doing my homework.

✓ However, this method has proven useless because I often ignore those reminders when I am playing video games or doing my homework.

句子时态不一致，前半句应使用现在完成时'have proven'表示到目前为止的结果，后半句描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× However, this method was proven useless because I often ignored those reminders when I was playing video games or doing my homework.

✓ However, this method has proven useless because I often ignore those reminders when I am playing video games or doing my homework.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'often ignored'改为'often ignore'，'was playing'改为'am playing'以保持时态一致。

× Oh there are a lot of them such as my parents phone number, my ID number and my family members birthdays.

✓ Oh, there are a lot of them, such as my parents' phone numbers, my ID number, and my family members' birthdays.

'parents'和'family members'为复数所有格，需加撇号表示所有关系；'phone number'和'birthday'应使用复数形式，因为指多个电话号码和生日。