记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Its depends”应为“It depends”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更简洁且语法正确的句子表达观点，同时避免重复和冗余。

示例: It depends. If something is interesting, I tend to remember it for a long time because it makes me very happy. However, if it's not enjoyable, I usually forget it quickly.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“have forgot”应为“have forgotten”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和更连贯的句子结构，明确描述事件和感受。

示例: Yes, I forgot to take my phone with me when I went shopping last weekend. Since I use my phone to make payments, I couldn't buy anything, which was quite frustrating.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，且有语法错误，如“everybody need”应为“everybody needs”。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的词汇，并注意语法一致性。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, but one essential habit is to wash my face and brush my teeth. This is important because good hygiene helps me feel confident when talking to others.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“doing the things according to paper”应为“do things according to the paper”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和句子结构。

示例: When I was young, I used to write important things on paper and follow the notes. Now, as an adult, I take photos of what I need to do on my phone and complete tasks based on those pictures.

× Its depends, if it is a interesting things I will remember for a long time because it made me feel over the moon, but if The thing is not good I will forget the things because it made me feel unhappy.

✓ It depends, if it is an interesting thing I will remember for a long time because it makes me feel over the moon, but if the thing is not good I will forget it because it makes me feel unhappy.

“Its”应为“It”，表示“它”；“a interesting things”中“a”用于单数名词，故“things”应改为单数“thing”，且“interesting”前应使用不定冠词“an”；“made”应改为现在时“makes”，因为描述的是一般情况；“The thing”中的“The”不应大写；“forget the things”中“things”应改为单数“it”，指代前文的“thing”；“made”同样改为“makes”。这些都是单复数和时态一致性的问题。

× Yes, I have forgot to take my phone outside when I shopping last weekend and you know the phone is important for us to make payment so that's time I fail to buy anything which makes me impression.

✓ Yes, I forgot to take my phone outside when I was shopping last weekend and you know the phone is important for us to make payments so at that time I failed to buy anything which made an impression on me.

“have forgot”应为“forgot”，因为“forgot”是过去式，且句中有明确时间“last weekend”，应使用一般过去时；“I shopping”缺少助动词，应为“I was shopping”；“make payment”应为复数“make payments”；“that's time”应为“at that time”；“fail”应为过去式“failed”；“which makes me impression”应为“which made an impression on me”，表达过去发生的事情。

× Well, I need to remember different things in my daily life, but one thing everybody need to do is wash their face and brush their teeth.

✓ Well, I need to remember different things in my daily life, but one thing everybody needs to do is wash their face and brush their teeth.

“everybody”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“needs”，这是主谓一致的单复数问题。

× If you don't do that, it may make you lose face when you talk with other people.

✓ If you don't do that, it may make you lose face when you talk with other people.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× When I was young, I would write important things on a paper and doing the things according to paper.

✓ When I was young, I would write important things on a paper and do the things according to the paper.

“and doing”应改为“and do”，因为前面是“would write”，两个动作应保持一致的动词形式；“according to paper”应加定冠词“the”，即“according to the paper”。

× Now when now I am an adult, I have my phone, I will take photo what I need to do and do the things according the picture.

✓ Now that I am an adult, I have my phone, I will take photos of what I need to do and do the things according to the picture.

“Now when now”重复，应改为“Now that”；“take photo”应为复数“take photos”；“take photo what I need to do”应为“take photos of what I need to do”；“according the picture”应为“according to the picture”。