记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“worn numerous first prize”应为“won numerous first prizes”。建议简化句子结构，避免复杂表达，同时注意时态一致。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I won several first prizes in memorising competitions, which made me feel very proud.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“barely forgotten”应为“barely forget”。句子结构不够自然，建议使用更简单的句型，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

示例: I rarely forget important things. My family trusts me a lot, so they often ask me to take care of important items when they travel.

建议: 回答内容较具体，但表达略显重复和啰嗦。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“remember it all the time”。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my busy work schedule. Therefore, I write important tasks on a memo and stick it on the refrigerator to remind myself.

建议: 回答中语法错误明显，如“when it comes to remember”应为“when it comes to remembering”。句子结构复杂且不够流畅，建议简化表达并使用适当的连接词。

示例: When I need to remember important things, I usually write them on a memo and stick it on the refrigerator because I tend to forget easily.

× Back in my childhood, I have worn numerous first prize in the memorizing competition which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

✓ Back in my childhood, I won numerous first prizes in memorizing competitions which gave me a sense of accomplishment.

这里应该使用一般过去时，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。'have worn' 是现在完成时且用词错误，'worn' 是wear的过去分词，正确动词应为 'won'（win的过去式）。此外，'first prize' 应为复数形式 'first prizes'，因为是多个奖项。

× Personally speaking, I barely forgotten something important.

✓ Personally speaking, I have barely forgotten something important.

这里应使用现在完成时，表示从过去到现在的经历。'forgotten' 是过去分词，缺少助动词 'have'。另外，'barely' 放在助动词后更自然。

× Back in my childhood, I have worn numerous first prize in the memorizing competition which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

✓ Back in my childhood, I won numerous first prizes in memorizing competitions which gave me a sense of accomplishment.

'first prize' 应为复数 'first prizes'，因为有多个奖项；'memorizing competition' 应为复数 'memorizing competitions'，表示多次比赛。

× When it comes to remember some crucial things I'm writing it on the memo is my go to choice since I am a forgettable person so I have to stick them on the refrigerator so that I can remember it all the time.

✓ When it comes to remembering some crucial things, writing them on a memo is my go-to choice since I am a forgetful person, so I have to stick them on the refrigerator so that I can remember them all the time.

'When it comes to' 后应接动名词 'remembering'。'I'm writing it on the memo' 语法不通，应改为 'writing them on a memo'。'forgettable' 应为形容词 'forgetful'。代词 'it' 应与复数 'things' 一致，改为 'them'。

× Personally speaking, I barely forgotten something important.

✓ Personally speaking, I have barely forgotten something important.

'barely' 是副词，修饰动词 'have forgotten'，位置应在助动词 'have' 后面。

× Personally speaking, I am a reliable person in my family, so my parents always send their important things to me when traveling.

✓ Personally speaking, I am a reliable person in my family, so my parents always send their important things to me when they are traveling.

'when traveling' 缺少主语，应补充 'they are traveling'，使句子完整。

× For the most part, I have to remember some hectic schedule of my work, so I have to write them on my memo on the refrigerator so that I can remember it all the time.

✓ For the most part, I have to remember some hectic work schedules, so I have to write them on my memo on the refrigerator so that I can remember them all the time.

'schedule' 应为复数 'schedules'，且 'of my work' 改为形容词性短语 'work schedules' 更自然。代词 'it' 应与复数 'them' 一致。