记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
I would say I have a pretty good memory for things that interest me. However, I sometimes struggle to remember certain details unless I write them down. To have with this, I often use a mobile app to signals and organize information which make it easy to remember.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Yes, I often forget important things, especially when I go shopping. For example, I sometimes I forget to buy essential items like mail or bread because I don't make a shopping list. This usually cost me to waste time and have to go back to the store later.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
On a daily basis I need to remember my homework, task and personal events, and I try not to forget important events like birthdays or anniversaries. And to keep track of everything I use my own digital calendar and align set alarm.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I usually write everything down in my phone or notebook. Sometime I set reminders so I don't forget. Uh. I also repeat important details and putting sticky notes on my deck also help me a lot.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 70.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "To have with this", "signals and organize"). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn để câu trả lời trở nên rõ ràng và hiệu quả hơn.
示例: I have a good memory for things that interest me. However, I sometimes struggle to remember details unless I write them down. To help with this, I often use a mobile app to organize information, which makes it easier to remember.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 65.0建议: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "sometimes I forget", "This usually cost me to waste time"). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tránh lỗi sai.
示例: Yes, I often forget important things, especially when I go shopping. For instance, I sometimes forget to buy essential items like milk or bread because I don't make a shopping list. As a result, I waste time and have to return to the store later.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 70.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: "task" nên là "tasks", "align set alarm" không chính xác). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tăng tính chính xác.
示例: On a daily basis, I need to remember my homework, tasks, and personal events. I also try not to forget important occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. To keep track of everything, I use my digital calendar and set alarms.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 65.0建议: Bạn trả lời khá đơn giản và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "Sometime" nên là "Sometimes", "putting sticky notes on my deck" không chính xác). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tránh lỗi sai, đồng thời mở rộng câu trả lời để phong phú hơn.
示例: I usually write everything down in my phone or notebook. Sometimes, I set reminders so I don't forget. Additionally, I repeat important details to myself, and putting sticky notes on my desk helps me a lot.
语法
× To have with this, I often use a mobile app to signals and organize information which make it easy to remember.
✓ To deal with this, I often use a mobile app to signal and organize information which makes it easy to remember.
The phrase 'To have with this' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To deal with this'. Also, 'signals' should be the base form 'signal' after 'to' because 'to' is a particle for the infinitive form. Additionally, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'information'.
× For example, I sometimes I forget to buy essential items like mail or bread because I don't make a shopping list.
✓ For example, I sometimes forget to buy essential items like milk or bread because I don't make a shopping list.
The word 'mail' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'milk' as a common essential grocery item. Also, the repeated 'I' is redundant and should be removed.
× This usually cost me to waste time and have to go back to the store later.
✓ This usually causes me to waste time and have to go back to the store later.
The verb 'cost' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'causes' to indicate the effect. Also, 'cost' does not take 'to' after it in this context.
× On a daily basis I need to remember my homework, task and personal events, and I try not to forget important events like birthdays or anniversaries.
✓ On a daily basis I need to remember my homework, tasks and personal events, and I try not to forget important events like birthdays or anniversaries.
The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural context with 'homework' and 'personal events'.
× And to keep track of everything I use my own digital calendar and align set alarm.
✓ And to keep track of everything I use my own digital calendar and set alarms.
The phrase 'align set alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'set alarms'. 'Align' is unnecessary and 'alarm' should be plural to match the context.
× Sometime I set reminders so I don't forget.
✓ Sometimes I set reminders so I don't forget.
The adverb 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.
× Uh. I also repeat important details and putting sticky notes on my deck also help me a lot.
✓ Uh. I also repeat important details and putting sticky notes on my desk also helps me a lot.
The phrase 'putting sticky notes' should be parallel with 'repeat', so it should be 'put sticky notes'. Also, 'deck' is incorrect; it should be 'desk'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'putting sticky notes'.
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