记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语句不够流畅，存在语法错误和停顿，建议练习连贯表达，避免断句错误。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述记忆力。

示例: I wouldn't say I'm very good at memorising things because my wife and parents often tell me that I have a poor memory.

建议: 回答内容重复且句子结构较为简单，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节描述。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things, especially my phone, which contains a lot of work materials. Sometimes I leave it at home, and that causes trouble because I have to go back to get it.

建议: 回答中句子结构不完整，建议合并句子使表达更自然，同时增加具体细节以丰富内容。

示例: Since I just graduated and started working, I need to remember the tasks I prepared the night before to complete each day.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，同时使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: Whenever I need to remember something important, I repeat it several times in my head or write it down in a notebook.

× Well, I wouldn't say that I do because I usually receive criticism from my wife and my parents that I do not have a very. Good memory.

✓ Well, I wouldn't say that I do because I usually receive criticism from my wife and my parents that I do not have a very good memory.

句子中“very.”和“Good”之间不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将句号去掉，连成完整的形容词短语“very good memory”。

× Well, yes, almost once every month because, the most important thing for me was my phone because it has a lot of work material in it.

✓ Well, yes, almost once every month because the most important thing for me is my phone since it has a lot of work material in it.

句中“was”与后文“has”时态不一致，且描述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时，故将“was”改为“is”。

× And sometimes I go to work without bringing my phone.

✓ Sometimes I go to work without bringing my phone.

句首不宜用“and”连接，影响句子结构的完整性和流畅性，应去掉“and”。

× And that really caused some trouble because they have to run back to my home.

✓ That really caused some trouble because I had to run back home.

句中“they have to run back to my home”主语不明确且时态不一致，应改为“I had to run back home”以符合上下文。

× Well, now that I have a job because I just graduated.

✓ Well, now that I have a job since I just graduated.

句中“because”与“now that”重复表达因果关系，且句子不完整，应将“because”改为“since”并合并句子。

× The only thing that I have to remember every day is the task that I have to prepare for every day, which I already made from the previous night.

✓ The only thing that I have to remember every day is the task that I have to prepare for every day, which I already made the night before.

“from the previous night”表达不自然，习惯用法为“the night before”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Well, every time I have something that I felt that it is important that I should remember later, I will repeat that in my head several times or even make a notebook in.

✓ Well, every time I have something that I feel is important and that I should remember later, I will repeat it in my head several times or even make a note of it in a notebook.

句中“felt”时态错误，应为现在时“feel”；“make a notebook in”表达错误，应为“make a note of it in a notebook”。