记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors, such as repeating 'when I was still'. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, when I was a student, I struggled with subjects like biology and history that required memorisation, which affected my grades.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clear structure. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' properly. Also, be more specific and concise in your explanation.

示例: I don't think I've forgotten anything very important because I always write down important dates, such as exams and birthdays, in my schedule to remind myself.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Avoid asking questions in your answer and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I don't have to remember many daily tasks because they have become habits, like brushing my teeth or having lunch. However, I do write down important things in my schedule to avoid forgetting them.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors, such as 'that's a game' and 'it send notifications'. Try to use clear and correct sentences, and link your ideas smoothly.

示例: I remember important things by using a schedule. In the past, I wrote them down in a planner, but now I use my smartphone and tablet, which send me notifications to remind me.

× Back in the days when I was still when I was still a student, I got quite poor remarks in recitations.

✓ Back in the days when I was still a student, I got quite poor remarks in recitations.

The phrase 'when I was still when I was still a student' contains a repeated segment which is a redundancy error rather than a grammar problem from the list. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence. This is a sentence structure error but since it is not in the list, we focus on the past tense usage which is correct here.

× And also those kind of subjects that needed to memorize a lot of things like biology, chemistry, Chinese, history, all I, all subjects that I hate, hate.

✓ And also those kinds of subjects that needed me to memorize a lot of things like biology, chemistry, Chinese, history, all subjects that I hate.

The phrase 'those kind of subjects' should be 'those kinds of subjects' because 'those' refers to plural and 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds'. Also, 'needed to memorize' is incomplete; it should be 'needed me to memorize' to clarify the subject performing the action. The sentence also had repetition and incomplete phrasing which were corrected for clarity.

× I don't think I have forgotten something really important for example, I think some dates are really important like exam dates and also someone's birthday or some anniversary and because I usually mark down the dates on my schedule so that I.

✓ I don't think I have forgotten anything really important. For example, I think some dates are really important like exam dates and also someone's birthday or some anniversary because I usually mark down the dates on my schedule so that I don't forget.

The original sentence is a run-on and incomplete. 'I have forgotten something really important' is acceptable but 'something' is better replaced with 'anything' in negative sentences. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity, maintaining present perfect tense appropriately.

× I'm not so sure what I need to remember in my daily life because I think most of them like their habits.

✓ I'm not so sure what I need to remember in my daily life because I think most of them are like habits.

The phrase 'most of them like their habits' is unclear and incorrectly structured. Changing it to 'most of them are like habits' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure errors.

× For example, I don't need to remember what time do I need to brush my teeth? What time do I need to have lunch?

✓ For example, I don't need to remember what time I need to brush my teeth or have lunch.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not question form. So 'what time do I need to brush my teeth?' should be 'what time I need to brush my teeth' in this context. Also, combining the two questions into one sentence improves fluency.

× Back in the old days I used paper and pens on the schedule book.

✓ Back in the old days, I used paper and pens in the schedule book.

The phrase 'on the schedule book' is incorrect preposition usage; 'in the schedule book' is correct because you write inside the book. The past tense 'used' is correct here.

× However, these days I usually used the smartphone and iPads to help me memorize important things and it send notifications.

✓ However, these days I usually use the smartphone and iPads to help me memorize important things and they send notifications.

The phrase 'these days' indicates present habitual action, so 'used' should be 'use' (present tense). Also, 'it send' should be 'they send' because 'smartphone and iPads' is plural. This corrects tense and subject-verb agreement errors.