记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答缺乏清晰的结构和连贯性，语法和词汇使用不准确，导致表达不自然且难以理解。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免重复和语法错误。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially routine stuff. However, when I was young, I could remember most things because I planned carefully.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不完整，缺乏具体细节。建议你用完整的句子回答问题，并举例说明忘记重要事情的具体情况。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times, both at work and at home. For example, I once forgot an important meeting because I didn't write it down.

建议: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，缺乏连贯的表达。建议你直接列举需要记住的具体事项，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my shopping list and the timetable for my exercise. Since I have a gym membership, I also have to remember the opening hours.

建议: 回答表达不完整，语法和用词不准确。建议你完整描述你如何使用工具来帮助记忆，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I usually use my mobile phone's calendar and reminder apps to record my plans. Sometimes, I also write notes on paper to help me remember important things.

× Well, I have to say I'm not good at them to remember they, they, they, they, they routine staff as but I, I when, when I was young, I can't remember almost all things and which planned it.

✓ Well, I have to say I'm not good at remembering routine stuff, but when I was young, I couldn't remember almost anything and what I had planned.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'them' and 'they' incorrectly and has unclear structure. 'Remember' should be followed by a gerund 'remembering'. Also, 'routine staff' is likely a typo for 'routine stuff'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× Well, I have to say I'm not good at them to remember they, they, they, they, they routine staff as but I, I when, when I was young, I can't remember almost all things and which planned it.

✓ Well, I have to say I'm not good at remembering routine stuff, but when I was young, I couldn't remember almost anything and what I had planned.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Can't remember' should be 'couldn't remember' to match the past time reference 'when I was young'. Also, 'which planned it' is unclear and corrected to 'what I had planned'.

× Yeah, I have such situation many times during my work and also my daily life at home. Sometimes I even the the the trivial things or important things if.

✓ Yeah, I have had such situations many times during my work and also in my daily life at home. Sometimes I even forget trivial or important things.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and is incomplete. 'Such situation' should be plural 'such situations'. The phrase 'Sometimes I even the the the trivial things or important things if' is incomplete and corrected to 'Sometimes I even forget trivial or important things' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, I have such situation many times during my work and also my daily life at home. Sometimes I even the the the trivial things or important things if.

✓ Yeah, I have had such situations many times during my work and also in my daily life at home. Sometimes I even forget trivial or important things.

The phrase 'during my work and also my daily life at home' needs a preposition before 'my daily life'. 'In my daily life' is correct. Also, 'during my work' is acceptable but 'at work' is more natural.

× Well, like the shopping list and some of the the timetable of my exercise because I, I have a member card of a gym club and you have to remember the the opening time and also you have to remember.

✓ Well, like the shopping list and the timetable of my exercise because I have a membership card for a gym club and you have to remember the opening times and also other details.

The original sentence has repeated 'the the' and incorrect article use. 'Member card' should be 'membership card'. 'Opening time' should be plural 'opening times' if referring to multiple days or hours. The sentence is corrected for article use and clarity.

× Well, like the shopping list and some of the the timetable of my exercise because I, I have a member card of a gym club and you have to remember the the opening time and also you have to remember.

✓ Well, like the shopping list and the timetable of my exercise because I have a membership card for a gym club and you have to remember the opening times and also other details.

The preposition 'of' in 'member card of a gym club' is incorrect; it should be 'membership card for a gym club'. Also, 'some of the timetable' is awkward; 'the timetable' is better.

× Sometimes I use a mobile phones calendar and reminder application, one of the application to record your planning and sometimes I make a note and paper and.

✓ Sometimes I use a mobile phone's calendar and reminder application, one of the applications to record my plans, and sometimes I make a note on paper.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'Mobile phones calendar' should be 'mobile phone's calendar'. 'One of the application' should be 'one of the applications'. 'Your planning' should be 'my plans' to maintain first person. 'Make a note and paper' is incomplete and corrected to 'make a note on paper'.