记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding repetition and filler words. Use complete sentences and correct grammar, and explain your strategies with linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I usually write important notes on my phone. Additionally, I create stories in my mind to help me remember better, which makes it easier to recall information later.

建议: Improve your answer by organizing it clearly with linking words and correcting grammar mistakes. Provide a concise and coherent story with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, last month, I went to a medical clinic for a check-up, but I forgot to bring my health card. Since it was my first visit, the staff asked for it, and I only realized I had forgotten it when I opened my purse.

建议: Make your answer more complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you do it.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. Therefore, I use a phone app called Notes to write things down, and sometimes I set alarms to remind me of important events.

建议: Avoid repeating previous answers exactly. Instead, expand your response with more details and use linking words to improve coherence. Correct grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

示例: To remember important things, I write notes in my phone's note app, which helps me keep track. Additionally, I set alarms to remind me before the tasks need to be completed, ensuring I don't forget them.

× Yes, I'm a good at memorizing the things as I always try to write down in my phone note.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things as I always try to write them down in my phone notes.

The phrase 'a good at' is incorrect; 'good at' does not require an article. Also, 'the things' is too specific and unnecessary here; 'things' is sufficient. Additionally, 'write down in my phone note' should be 'write them down in my phone notes' to correctly use the plural and object pronoun.

× So at least I remember the things or I do things by Mickey.

✓ So at least I remember things or I do things by memory.

The phrase 'do things by Mickey' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'do things by memory'. Also, 'the things' should be 'things' to avoid unnecessary specificity.

× I remember things by making stories in my mind. So I will I don't for get it.

✓ I remember things by making stories in my mind so I don't forget them.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words ('I will I don't for get it'). Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So these are some strategies I I.

✓ So these are some strategies I use.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words ('I I'). Adding the verb 'use' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I will. Remember last month when I was going for check up to the medical clinic, I forgot my health card and it was the first visit for that clinic.

✓ Yes, I remember last month when I was going for a check-up to the medical clinic, I forgot my health card and it was my first visit to that clinic.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used here; 'remember' is the correct verb. Also, 'check up' should be hyphenated as 'check-up', and 'first visit for that clinic' should be 'first visit to that clinic' for correct preposition use.

× So when I read that they asked me for the health card an when I open my purse and I I just realized that oh, I forgot my health care.

✓ So when I read that they asked me for the health card and when I opened my purse, I just realized that, oh, I forgot my health card.

The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'. The verb tense should be past tense 'opened' to match the past context. Also, 'health care' should be 'health card' to be consistent with the context.

× I need phone app but to remember the things as I always write down in my phone in on call in app called notes and also some time I put the alarm to remindme important things.

✓ I need a phone app to remember things as I always write them down in an app called Notes on my phone, and sometimes I set an alarm to remind me of important things.

The sentence lacks articles before 'phone app' and 'app called Notes'. 'Some time' should be 'sometimes'. 'Remindme' should be two words 'remind me'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Also I always write down the notes for.

✓ Also, I always write down notes.

The phrase 'write down the notes for' is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'for' completes the sentence correctly.

× As I mentioned earlier, I used the phone to remember the things by writing down it in the note app, so that is also helpful for me.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I use my phone to remember things by writing them down in the Notes app, so that is also helpful for me.

'Used' should be 'use' to match present tense context. 'Writing down it' is incorrect; it should be 'writing them down' to correctly use the object pronoun. 'Note app' should be 'Notes app' as the app's name.

× An also I put the alarm for the for the important things to be done by specific time, so it always reminding me before that timeline.

✓ Also, I set an alarm for important things to be done by a specific time, so it always reminds me before that deadline.

'An' should be 'And' or 'Also'. 'Put the alarm' is better as 'set an alarm'. 'For the for the' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Specific time' needs an article 'a'. 'Reminding me' should be 'reminds me' to match subject-verb agreement. 'Timeline' is better replaced with 'deadline' for clarity.