记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide a clear, concise response. For example, start with a direct answer, then give a specific example with linking words to explain.

示例: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things; however, sometimes I do forget important appointments. For instance, last week I forgot a check-up appointment with my GP because I didn't note it down.

建议: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear, structured answer with linking words to explain the situation and its consequences. Use specific vocabulary related to the context.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For example, last month I went shopping but forgot to bring my card and cash, so I couldn't buy anything and had to return home.

建议: Try to organise your answer by grouping similar items and using linking words to make it coherent. Avoid repetition and use precise vocabulary to describe daily tasks.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember people's names and phone numbers, appointment dates, work schedules, and household chores. These are essential to keep my day organised and productive.

建议: Reduce repetition and improve fluency. Use linking words to explain your methods clearly and provide specific examples of how you remember important tasks.

示例: Usually, I try to keep important things in my mind, but if the list is long, I write them down and set alarms on my phone to ensure I don't forget anything.

× I remember her last week I just forgot my appointment because I have booked an appointment with my GP so I have to so so I had to go there for my check up and I just forget it.

✓ I remember last week I just forgot my appointment because I had booked an appointment with my GP so I had to go there for my check up and I just forgot it.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Have booked' should be 'had booked' to maintain past perfect tense, and 'forget' should be 'forgot' to match the past tense narrative.

× Yes, it happened me lot of times when I forgot something important.

✓ Yes, it happened to me a lot of times when I forgot something important.

The verb 'happened' requires the preposition 'to' before the pronoun 'me'. Also, 'lot of times' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× I remember last month I went for shopping and I didn't carry my card.

✓ I remember last month I went shopping and I didn't carry my card.

The phrase 'went for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'went shopping'. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.

× I just forgot it at home and I just uh-huh.

✓ I just forgot it at home and I just...

The phrase 'uh-huh' is an informal filler and does not contribute to the sentence. It should be omitted or replaced with a proper continuation.

× I spent around 2 hours on shopping and because I I didn't have any cast at cash as well.

✓ I spent around 2 hours shopping and because I didn't have any cash as well.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'shopping'. Also, 'cast at cash' is incorrect; it should be 'cash'. The phrase 'as well' is acceptable here.

× So when I looked, looked at my pocket. So I, I just.

✓ So when I looked at my pocket, I just...

The sentence is incomplete and has repeated words. It should be combined into a single coherent sentence.

× Well in my daily life I need to remember peoples name, their phone numbers, appointment appointment dates and my work should rules.

✓ Well in my daily life I need to remember people's names, their phone numbers, appointment dates and my work schedule rules.

'Peoples name' should be 'people's names' to show possession and plural. 'Appointment appointment dates' is repetitive and should be 'appointment dates'. 'Work should rules' is incorrect; likely intended 'work schedule rules'.

× I need to remember my house, household chores as well what I have to do.

✓ I need to remember my household chores as well as what I have to do.

'My house' is unclear in this context; likely the speaker means 'household chores'. Also, 'as well what I have to do' should be 'as well as what I have to do' for correct conjunction usage.

× Most of the time I I always tried to keep in keepin my keep in my mind the important things.

✓ Most of the time I always try to keep the important things in my mind.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb tense. 'Tried' should be 'try' to match present habitual action. 'Keep in keepin my keep in my mind' is redundant and should be simplified.

× But but if if there is a long list and I have and I have to do something important, then I just do them down so that I don't forget it.

✓ But if there is a long list and I have to do something important, then I just write them down so that I don't forget them.

Repeated words 'but but', 'if if', and 'I have and I have' should be removed. 'Do them down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write them down'. Also, 'forget it' should be 'forget them' to agree with plural 'things'.

× And I put alarm on my phone so so that I can remember those things on.

✓ And I put an alarm on my phone so that I can remember those things.

The phrase 'remember those things on' is incorrect; 'on' is unnecessary. Also, 'put alarm' should be 'put an alarm' to include the article.