记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni uttor e bhalo grammar use korun, jemon 'I can memorise songs well' ebong sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe connect korun. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte chesta korun ebong beshi proyojonio tattho din.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially songs, because I am a singer. I can memorise songs in Hindi, Bangla, and English and sing them confidently.

建议: Apnar uttor e grammar ebong shobdo babohar shothik korun. Sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe connect korun ebong proyojonio tattho spostho bhabe bolun. Apnar feelings ke bistarito bhabe bolte paren.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, a few days ago, I went to the market and bought everything, but I forgot to bring my mother's medicine. I felt very sad and disappointed about it.

建议: Apnar uttor ke shothik sentence e porinoto korun ebong proyojonio tattho spostho bhabe bolun. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical ebong sohoje bujhte paren emon korun.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as my work, family responsibilities, children's school activities, healthy food, and regular exercise. I think these are very important to maintain a balanced life.

建议: Apnar uttor ke shothik grammar ebong sentence structure e porinoto korun. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro prokashmukto korun ebong proyojonio tattho spostho bhabe bolun.

示例: I remember important things by organizing them in folders. I think the best way is to take notes either on paper or on my mobile phone, which helps me keep track of everything accurately.

× I can memory song very well because I am a singer.

✓ I can memorize songs very well because I am a singer.

The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used; the correct verb form is 'memorize' followed by the plural noun 'songs' to indicate multiple songs. 'Memory' is a noun, not a verb.

× I can memories Hindi, Bangla and English songs and sing them well.

✓ I can memorize Hindi, Bangla, and English songs and sing them well.

The verb 'memories' is incorrect; the base form 'memorize' should be used here. Also, the list of languages should be separated by commas for clarity.

× Yes, I forgot something important if you day ago, I went to the market and both everything, but I forgot to bring my mother's medicine.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important a few days ago. I went to the market and bought everything, but I forgot to bring my mother's medicine.

The phrase 'if you day ago' is incorrect; it should be 'a few days ago' to indicate past time. The word 'both' is a misspelling of 'bought', the past tense of 'buy'.

× It is very. Sad. And very, Field said. I barely feel sad.

✓ It is very sad. I barely feel sad.

The phrase 'Field said' is incorrect and unclear; it seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. The sentence should be simplified to express the feeling clearly.

× Yes, I think we should remember many things in our daily lives. Such as our daily work and family, children, school, food. And. Healthy exercise. And I think is very important. Or Remember Me. And my.

✓ Yes, I think we should remember many things in our daily lives, such as our daily work, family, children, school, food, and healthy exercise. I think it is very important to remember these things.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity. 'Remember Me. And my.' is unclear and removed for correctness.

× Remember in folders things.

✓ I remember things by organizing them in folders.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. Adding subject and verb clarifies the meaning.

× I think that is said an accurate way to remember important things is to take notes rather on paper or. On our on your mobile phone.

✓ I think that an accurate way to remember important things is to take notes, either on paper or on your mobile phone.

The phrase 'rather on paper or. On our on your mobile phone' is incorrect. 'Either...or' is the correct correlative conjunction to use here, and 'our on your' is confusing; 'your' is appropriate.

× I think is the better idea.

✓ I think it is a better idea.

The phrase 'the better idea' is incorrect here; 'a better idea' is appropriate when comparing options without specifying a particular one.