记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有點不完整，句子結構不夠自然，且有語法錯誤。建議你在回答時，使用完整句子並且避免斷句不連貫，這樣聽起來會更自然且有效。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember my friends' phone numbers and their addresses.

建议: 你的回答中有多處語法錯誤和不連貫的句子，且內容表達不清楚。建議你在回答時注意時態一致，並且使用連接詞使句子更流暢，這樣能讓你的回答更有說服力。

示例: Yes, I have. For instance, last week I forgot an important meeting with my friends because I had just returned from Germany and was suffering from jet lag, which made my schedule chaotic.

建议: 你的回答內容有條理，但句子結構和連接詞使用還可以加強。建議你使用更多連接詞來使句子更流暢，並且注意句子完整性。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my university class schedule because it changes every day or week. This is quite different from high school, where the schedule was always the same. Therefore, I'm still trying to get used to this big difference.

建议: 你的回答表達了主要意思，但有些句子不完整且語法不正確。建議你使用完整句子並且清楚表達你的方法，這樣會讓回答更自然且有效。

示例: I usually write important things down in my notebook, especially if they are unusual. However, since I sometimes forget to bring my notebook, I mostly use my cell phone to record them, such as using Google Calendar.

× I can memorize my friends phone numbers and. Address is.

✓ I can memorize my friends' phone numbers and addresses.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The phrase 'and. Address is.' is not a complete sentence and disrupts the flow. Also, 'friends' should be possessive ('friends' phone numbers'), and 'address' should be plural to match 'phone numbers'. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a complete, grammatically correct sentence.

× Last week I forget a important meeting with my friends because I just went back from Germany.

✓ Last week I forgot an important meeting with my friends because I had just come back from Germany.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match 'Last week'. Also, 'a important' should be 'an important' because 'important' starts with a vowel sound. 'Just went back' is better expressed as 'had just come back' to indicate the action happened before the meeting.

× An I have jet lag and I had J legs so my schedule is. I've also chaos.

✓ And I have jet lag and I had jet lag, so my schedule was chaotic.

'An' should be 'And'. 'J legs' is a typo for 'jet lag'. The phrase 'my schedule is. I've also chaos.' is fragmented and incorrect. It should be 'my schedule was chaotic' to express the state of the schedule. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Every week or every day students have different class schedule.

✓ Every week or every day, students have different class schedules.

'Class schedule' should be plural 'class schedules' because it refers to multiple days or weeks with different schedules. Adding a comma after 'every day' improves readability.

× However, in high school, students always have the same class schedule.

✓ However, in high school, students always have the same class schedule.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I think it's a. Big difference and I'm trying to be accustomed to it.

✓ I think it's a big difference, and I'm trying to get accustomed to it.

The period after 'a' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'Big' should not be capitalized. Also, 'be accustomed to it' is better expressed as 'get accustomed to it' to indicate the process of adapting.

× Sometimes I will write it down on my notebook because it is not really usual.

✓ Sometimes I write it down in my notebook because it is not very usual.

'Will' is unnecessary here; simple present 'write' is better for habitual actions. 'On my notebook' should be 'in my notebook' because we write inside a notebook. 'Not really usual' is better expressed as 'not very usual'.

× I'm afraid that I forget to bring my notebook to school, so most of time I just write it down on my cell phone.

✓ I'm afraid that I will forget to bring my notebook to school, so most of the time I just write it down on my cell phone.

'Forget' should be 'will forget' to express future possibility. 'Most of time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Write it down on my cell phone' is acceptable but 'in my cell phone' could also be used.

× Maybe unlock Google Calendar?

✓ Maybe I will use Google Calendar?

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I will use' clarifies the intention to use Google Calendar as a method to remember things.