记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "What I should do?" and "without having buying it." To improve, try to form complete and grammatically correct sentences, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I often forget to buy some items and have to go back home to get them. This happens quite frequently because I don't make a list beforehand.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented with short sentences and some awkward phrasing like "And because of that." Try to combine sentences for better flow and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

示例: Yes, unfortunately, I forgot my ex-girlfriend's birthday last year. Because of that, I didn't plan anything special for us to do together on her special day, which made her quite upset.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences and grammatical errors. To improve, respond with complete sentences that directly answer the question. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific details about what you need to remember.

示例: As a medical student, I need to remember various things daily, such as the names of medications, how to treat different diseases, and all the information I have studied to help save lives.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Also, explain your method more clearly and provide a reason or example to make your answer more effective.

示例: I don't have a perfect method, but when I need to remember important things, I usually write them down on my cell phone. Then, I try to check my notes regularly so I don't forget.

× It is common for me to forget that I should buy something and I go back home without having buying it.

✓ It is common for me to forget that I should buy something and I go back home without having bought it.

The phrase 'having buying' is incorrect because after 'having' we need the past participle form of the verb. The correct form is 'having bought' to indicate the action was not completed before going home.

× I did.

✓ I did.

This sentence is short but correct in past tense usage as a response to the previous statement. No correction needed here.

× And because of that. I didn't plan anything for us to do together at her special day.

✓ And because of that, I didn't plan anything for us to do together on her special day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a period to separate two related clauses, which should be connected with a comma. Also, the preposition 'at' is incorrect for 'special day'; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate a specific day.

× Different. Those is for medications.

✓ Different. Those are for medications.

The pronoun 'Those' is plural and should be paired with the plural verb 'are' instead of the singular 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× How to treat the disease? In.

✓ How to treat the disease?

The word 'In.' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The question is complete without it, so it should be removed for clarity.

× I'm a medical student so I need to remember. Different. Those is for medications. How to treat the disease? In. Everything that I have ever studied in order to save lives.

✓ I'm a medical student, so I need to remember different things: those for medications, how to treat diseases, and everything that I have ever studied in order to save lives.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'disease' should be pluralized to 'diseases' to generalize the statement.

× I just write it down. My cell phone.

✓ I just write it down on my cell phone.

The phrase 'My cell phone' is a fragment and lacks a preposition to connect it to the verb 'write it down.' Adding 'on' clarifies that the writing is done on the cell phone.