记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "I tend to forget where are my keys," say "I often forget where I put my keys." Also, avoid unnecessary repetition like "Berry. Careful" which seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. Keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my keys or wallet. Therefore, I have to be very careful whenever I use something to avoid losing it.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas. For example, say "I once forgot an important password, so since then I have been careful to write all my passwords in a notebook." Also, use linking words like "so" to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot an important password, so since that day, I have been very careful to write down all my passwords in a notebook.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to use complete sentences and correct vocabulary. For example, instead of "Feeling my desk," say "checking my schedule." Also, avoid fragmented sentences and explain your tasks clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Every day, I need to keep track of my tasks, such as checking my schedule, refueling my car, doing the laundry, and sometimes mopping the house. These are my regular household chores.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs better grammar and clarity. For example, "I write down" instead of "I cried down." Also, clarify the timing: you write important dates at the beginning of the year and daily notes at the end of each day. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I keep a journal where, at the beginning of the year, I write down all the important dates and events for the year. Then, every day, I write notes about what is important for the next day or week. This helps me stay organized and relaxed.

× I have to be Berry. Careful every time I use something so I won't forget.

✓ I have to be very careful every time I use something so I won't forget.

The word 'Berry' is a misspelling of 'very'. Also, the adjective 'careful' should be preceded by the adverb 'very' to correctly modify it. The correct order is adverb + adjective.

× Once I forgot her one of my password for an important and after I use.

✓ Once I forgot one of my passwords for something important and after I used it.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used and unnecessary here. Also, 'password' should be plural 'passwords' to match 'one of my passwords'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Once I forgot her one of my password for an important and after I use.

✓ Once I forgot one of my passwords for something important and after I used it.

The verb 'use' should be in the past tense 'used' to maintain past tense consistency with 'forgot'.

× So since that day I have been very careful writing down all my passwords on a notebook.

✓ So since that day I have been very careful writing down all my passwords in a notebook.

The correct preposition to use with 'notebook' in this context is 'in', not 'on'.

× Like. Feeling my desk, my task, my car, gas and do the laundry.

✓ Like filling my desk, my tasks, my car's gas, and doing the laundry.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Feeling' is a misspelling of 'filling'. Also, 'do the laundry' should be 'doing the laundry' to maintain parallel structure with other gerunds.

× Normally a specific or a house chords.

✓ Normally specific or house chores.

The phrase 'a specific or a house chords' is incorrect. 'Chords' should be 'chores', and the article 'a' is unnecessary before plural or uncountable nouns here.

× Every December I have a journal.

✓ Every December, I keep a journal.

The phrase 'have a journal' is less natural than 'keep a journal' when referring to maintaining a journal. Also, a comma after 'December' improves readability.

× In that journal, at the beginning of the year, I cried down all the important dates and events for my for the rest of the year.

✓ In that journal, at the beginning of the year, I wrote down all the important dates and events for the rest of the year.

The verb 'cried' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'wrote' for the action of recording information.

× And daily at the end of the year, I write down what it's important for the next day or for that week.

✓ And daily, at the end of the day, I write down what is important for the next day or for that week.

The phrase 'at the end of the year' is likely a mistake; 'at the end of the day' fits the context better. Also, 'what it's important' should be 'what is important'.