记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'BIC AWS'. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, using simple and natural English. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by repeating information and using visual aids to help me remember better.

建议: Your answer has some good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as my own birthday last year. Although I usually remember things well by using repetition and visualization techniques, sometimes I still forget due to being busy or distracted.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better grammar and linking words to make it more coherent. Try to use a topic sentence followed by specific examples and connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks that I have to complete on specific dates. For example, I have to keep track of my homework, assignments, and other important work to ensure I finish them on time.

建议: Your answer has good content but is fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to combine your sentences using linking words and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in my personal diary. This way, I can keep track of all the important points and tasks I need to complete each day, which helps me stay organized.

× BIC AWS. Brain is the one thing which is used to memorize all the things which happened to me and.

✓ BIC AWS. The brain is the one thing which is used to memorize all the things that have happened to me.

The sentence incorrectly ends with 'and' which is incomplete and confusing. Also, 'which happened to me and' is incomplete; it should be 'that have happened to me' to correctly use the present perfect tense for past events relevant to the present.

× I forgot my birthday last year.

✓ I forgot my birthday last year.

This sentence is correct in past tense usage; no correction needed.

× I didn't remember what's the date exactly so.

✓ I didn't remember the exact date.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'What's the date exactly so' is incorrect structure. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× I believe that my brain is quite efficient headstrong information, especially when I use techniques that reputation and visualization, but sometimes.

✓ I believe that my brain is quite efficient at retaining information, especially when I use techniques like repetition and visualization, but sometimes.

The phrase 'efficient headstrong information' is incorrect; it should be 'efficient at retaining information'. 'Techniques that reputation and visualization' is incorrect; it should be 'techniques like repetition and visualization'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× I need to remember my task which I have to done in that date.

✓ I need to remember my tasks which I have to do on that date.

The phrase 'have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do' because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× For example my homework, my assignment or any other work which I have to do in that particular day.

✓ For example, my homework, my assignments, or any other work which I have to do on that particular day.

The word 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to be consistent with the list. Also, a comma is needed after 'For example' for correct punctuation.

× Write down all the important points and all my. Works which I have to done in a day, so just keep me reminding my important things.

✓ I write down all the important points and all my work which I have to do in a day, so it just keeps reminding me of my important things.

'Have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do'. 'Works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here. Also, 'keep me reminding' is incorrect; it should be 'keeps reminding me'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.