记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat natural but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid vague phrases like 'very prominent'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because it helps me recall important events from the past. For example, I can easily remember dates and appointments, which keeps me organised.

建议: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clearer expression. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to explain your point. Also, be specific about what you forget and why.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes, especially when I am in a hurry. For instance, I have missed appointments because I was rushing and not paying attention.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. To help me, I make notes on my mobile phone and sometimes ask my mother to remind me.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to speak clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to explain how you remember things and give specific details.

示例: I remember important things by using the reminder app on my mobile phone. This method is very helpful because it keeps me organised and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

× I'm good at memorizing things because sometimes it is very prominent to know what we had done in the past.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things because sometimes it is very important to know what we have done in the past.

The word 'prominent' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'important'. Also, 'had done' is past perfect tense which is not appropriate here; present perfect 'have done' should be used to indicate actions completed at an unspecified time before now.

× I forget to some important things like my appointment and these kinds of things.

✓ I forget some important things like my appointment and these kinds of things.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'forget'. The verb 'forget' should be followed directly by the object without 'to'.

× To be honest, when I know The thing is very prominent to me, I make a note on my mobile phone as well as. Told my mother to help me.

✓ To be honest, when I know the thing is very important to me, I make a note on my mobile phone as well as tell my mother to help me.

The phrase 'Told my mother' is incorrect as it lacks a subject and is in past tense. It should be 'tell my mother' to maintain present tense and proper sentence structure. Also, 'prominent' should be 'important' and 'The' should be lowercase 'the'.

× Oh well, I think that remember things in my daily life is a crucial for me and with the help of my module I reminder thing so which is beneficial for me and it helps me to stay organized.

✓ Oh well, I think that remembering things in my daily life is crucial for me and with the help of my mobile, I remind myself, which is beneficial for me and helps me to stay organized.

The verb 'remember' should be in gerund form 'remembering' as it is the subject of the sentence. 'A crucial' is incorrect; 'crucial' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Module' is likely a typo for 'mobile'. 'I reminder thing' is incorrect; it should be 'I remind myself'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.