记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some unclear phrases, such as 'or a.' To improve, try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and ensuring all sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I usually write notes or ask others to remind me if something important is coming up. Recently, I've also started setting reminders on my phone, which has been very helpful.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'work births' and 'Go through all these things.' To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and provide specific details with proper linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my husband's birthday, which was especially important as it was our first one after marriage. I felt very guilty about it. Since then, I have started using phone reminders to make sure I don't forget important dates.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Add to be remembered.' To improve, try to form complete sentences, use linking words, and provide specific examples of daily activities you need to remember.

示例: I need to remember daily activities like appointments and errands. Since I have a bad memory, I make lists and set reminders on my phone. Additionally, I sometimes ask my family or friends to remind me if something is really important.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by combining short sentences and correcting grammar for better flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a more natural response.

示例: To remember important things, I usually make a note or set a reminder on my phone. However, if I forget to do these, I ask my family or friends to remind me a day before the event.

× I have a very bad memory.

✓ I have a very poor memory.

The phrase 'very bad memory' is understandable but 'poor memory' is a more natural collocation in English when referring to someone's ability to remember things.

× I often make note of it or a.

✓ I often make a note of it or ask someone.

The phrase 'make note of it or a' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'make a note of it' and to complete the sentence, 'or ask someone' fits the intended meaning.

× Tell other people to remind me if anything is important.

✓ I tell other people to remind me if anything is important.

The original sentence lacks a subject before 'Tell'. Adding 'I' clarifies who is performing the action.

× That is coming up, and one more thing that helped me these days is setting up reminders.

✓ That is coming up, and one more thing that has helped me these days is setting up reminders.

The phrase 'helped me these days' is incorrect because 'these days' refers to the present, so the present perfect tense 'has helped' is appropriate.

× The important thing that I forgot? Was my husband's birthday.

✓ The important thing that I forgot was my husband's birthday.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× It was his work births.

✓ It was his work birthday.

The word 'births' is incorrect here; the singular noun 'birthday' is appropriate.

× 1st birthday after our marriage.

✓ It was his first birthday after our marriage.

The phrase is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It was his' completes the sentence and 'first' should be spelled out in formal speech.

× But now I keep reminders in my phone which helped me too.

✓ But now I keep reminders on my phone which help me too.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to a phone. Also, 'helped' should be present tense 'help' to match 'now'.

× Go through all these things.

✓ I go through all these things.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject.

× The activities that we do daily. Add to be remembered.

✓ The activities that we do daily need to be remembered.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a complete sentence with proper verb usage improves clarity.

× An I have a bad memory so I make a list of it.

✓ And I have a bad memory so I make a list of them.

'An' should be 'And'. Also, 'a list of it' is incorrect because 'activities' is plural; 'them' correctly refers to plural activities.

× Particularly, I set up reminders for important things, or I ask my friends or my family to remind me.

✓ Particularly, I set up reminders for important things, or I ask my friends or my family to remind me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× If something is really necessary.

✓ If something is really necessary, I ask for help.

The original sentence is a fragment. Adding a main clause completes the sentence.

× When it comes to remembering important things, I either make a note of it or set a reminder in my phone.

✓ When it comes to remembering important things, I either make a note of them or set a reminder on my phone.

'It' should be 'them' to agree with 'important things' (plural). Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'.

× Sometimes. I forget even doing those two things I tell to my family and my friends to remind me one day before it's coming up.

✓ Sometimes, I forget even to do those two things, so I tell my family and my friends to remind me one day before it comes up.

The original sentence has punctuation errors and awkward phrasing. 'Forget even doing' should be 'forget even to do'. 'Tell to my family' should be 'tell my family'. 'It's coming up' should be 'it comes up' for clarity.