记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'memorizing even' and 'friends name'. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing a clear example. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget the names of my close friends, which can be quite embarrassing. I find it challenging to remember details unless I write them down.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. It is important to directly answer the question with a clear example and avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases like 'Kiana was struggling so much to find that keyword'. Try to structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot where I parked my car, which caused me a lot of stress. Eventually, I found it after searching for a while, but it taught me to be more careful.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing, such as 'I do follow of basic daily routine' and 'all most important thing'. Try to use clearer sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with singular/plural forms and article usage.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to follow a basic routine. For example, having meals on time and taking my medicine are very important because I have had health issues recently. Therefore, I make sure not to miss my medication.

建议: Your answer provides relevant information but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'where a high return the important things'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: To remember important things, I usually make notes on my phone and sometimes carry a diary where I write down tasks for the day. Additionally, I set alarms to remind me of important activities.

× I'm very bad at memorizing even.

✓ I'm very bad at memorizing things.

The phrase 'memorizing even' is incorrect because 'even' is not a quantifier and does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'memorizing things' to indicate the general activity of memorization.

× It's quite hard for me to remember my friends name, even they are very close to me.

✓ It's quite hard for me to remember my friends' names, even though they are very close to me.

The word 'friends' is plural, so the possessive form should be 'friends'' and the noun 'name' should be plural 'names' to match. Also, 'even' should be followed by 'though' to form the correct conjunction 'even though'.

× Sometimes I used to forget their names.

✓ Sometimes I forget their names.

The phrase 'used to' implies a past habit that no longer occurs. Since the context is about a current difficulty, the simple present tense 'forget' is more appropriate.

× Actually on the person who keeps on forgetting a lot of things.

✓ Actually, I am the person who keeps on forgetting a lot of things.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I am' completes the sentence structure.

× But if I had to think about a particular incident, then it would be a.

✓ But if I had to think about a particular incident, then it would be one.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'a' which is incomplete. It should be followed by a noun or replaced with 'one' to refer to an incident.

× Day when I forgot my car.

✓ The day when I forgot my car.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'The' at the beginning to specify the particular day.

× Kiana was struggling so much to find that keyword.

✓ I was struggling so much to find that keyword.

The speaker refers to themselves but uses 'Kiana' which is unclear or incorrect. It should be 'I' to indicate the speaker's experience.

× At the end I realized that I forgot.

✓ In the end, I realized that I had forgotten.

The phrase 'At the end' is better expressed as 'In the end'. Also, 'forgot' should be in past perfect 'had forgotten' to indicate an action completed before another past action.

× For me I do follow of basic daily routine for my day and it includes.

✓ For me, I follow a basic daily routine, and it includes.

The phrase 'follow of' is incorrect; 'follow' does not require 'of'. Also, 'basic daily routine for my day' is redundant; 'basic daily routine' suffices.

× Having a meal on time, taking my medicine is all most important thing for me because I have been through a lot of health issues recently.

✓ Having a meal on time and taking my medicine are the most important things for me because I have been through a lot of health issues recently.

'All most' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'the most'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the compound subject 'Having a meal on time and taking my medicine'.

× That's why taking a medication is one of the most important thing for me.

✓ That's why taking medication is one of the most important things for me.

'A medication' is incorrect here; 'medication' is uncountable. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'one of the most'.

× To remember the important things, I do make some notes on my phone and sometimes I do carry my diary where a high return the important things that I have to complete on that particular day.

✓ To remember important things, I make some notes on my phone and sometimes carry my diary where I write the important things that I have to complete on that particular day.

The phrase 'a high return' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'I write'. Also, 'do make' and 'do carry' are unnecessary emphases and can be simplified.

× And I also put some alarm clock so that I can remember what should be done in that.

✓ And I also set an alarm clock so that I can remember what should be done then.

'Put some alarm clock' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'set' and 'an alarm clock' is singular. 'In that' is unclear and should be 'then' to refer to the time.