记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复和语法错误。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget names and faces.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不连贯，缺少逻辑连接词。建议使用清晰的句子结构，合理使用连接词，并具体说明感受和行动。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which was very important to me. I felt really sorry because we are very close, so I apologized and made it up to him.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议注意介词和冠词的使用，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember work responsibilities like important project deadlines and scheduled meetings, so I use technology to help me keep track of them.

建议: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明使用的工具，并用正确的句子结构表达。

示例: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. I usually use apps like calendars and to-do lists on my iPhone, which is indispensable to me.

× No, I wouldn't consider myself a good ads memorizing things because all I also forgot the names and faces.

✓ No, I wouldn't consider myself good at memorizing things because I also forget names and faces.

这里“a good ads memorizing things”结构不正确，应该用形容词短语“good at memorizing things”来表达擅长记忆的意思。ads是拼写错误，应为at。建议使用“good at + 动名词”结构。

× Yes I have got something really important for me, I once forgot to forgot my best friends birthday and I feel very sorry and because we are very close so I'm ready to make ready to apology and make happen to it.

✓ Yes, I have something really important to me. I once forgot my best friend's birthday and felt very sorry because we are very close, so I was ready to apologize and make it up.

句中“forgot to forgot”重复错误，应为“forgot”。“feel”时态应与过去事件一致，改为“felt”。“make ready to apology”表达错误，应为“ready to apologize”。“make happen to it”表达不自然，改为“make it up”。建议注意动词时态和固定搭配的正确使用。

× As for my daily life, I need to keep track off my work responsibilities such as their important deadline of projects are some scheduled meeting, so I need to remember all these things using technology.

✓ As for my daily life, I need to keep track of my work responsibilities such as important project deadlines and some scheduled meetings, so I need to remember all these things using technology.

“keep track off”中的“off”应为“of”。“their important deadline of projects are some scheduled meeting”结构混乱，应改为“important project deadlines and some scheduled meetings”。建议注意介词搭配和句子结构的清晰。

× I rely heavily. Aren't technology to remember important since I usually use apps are. Afsar some applications to remember my importances, so my iPhone is indespensible.

✓ I rely heavily on technology to remember important things since I usually use apps or some applications to remember my important tasks, so my iPhone is indispensable.

“Aren't technology”错误，应为“on technology”。“apps are. Afsar”拼写和语法错误，应为“apps or some”。“importances”用词不当，应为“important things”或“important tasks”。“indespensible”拼写错误，应为“indispensable”。建议注意介词搭配、拼写和词汇选择。

× I use used to size calendars or To Do List to how.

✓ I use calendar apps or To-Do Lists to help me.

“use used to size calendars or To Do List to how”语法混乱，表达不清。应简化为“I use calendar apps or To-Do Lists to help me.”，注意动词时态和名词复数形式。建议简化句子结构，确保表达清晰。