记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Javobingizda gaplar to'liq va aniq bo'lishi kerak. Ingliz tilida gaplarni to'liq va mantiqan bog'langan holda ifodalashga harakat qiling. Masalan, "It depends on the situation. If something is important, it's easy for me to memorize it, but I find it difficult to remember small things." kabi.

示例: It depends on the situation. If something is important, it's easy for me to memorize it, but I find it difficult to remember small things.

建议: Javobingizni yanada aniq va mantiqan bog'langan qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling. Qo'shimcha ma'lumotlarni bog'lovchi so'zlar bilan biriktiring va gaplarni to'liq tugating. Masalan, "I am usually good at memorizing things, but once I forgot I had an exam. Fortunately, my friend called me in the morning to remind me, so I woke up and went to the exam." kabi.

示例: I am usually good at memorizing things, but once I forgot I had an exam. Fortunately, my friend called me in the morning to remind me, so I woke up and went to the exam.

建议: Javobingizda aniq va to'g'ri so'zlardan foydalaning. "Players" va "payers" so'zlari o'rniga to'g'ri so'zlarni tanlang. Masalan, "I need to remember my classes and exams at university. Sometimes I forget about them, which is not good." kabi.

示例: I need to remember my classes and exams at university. Sometimes I forget about them, which is not good.

建议: Javobingizni yanada aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I use a few methods to remember important things. First, I use the reminder app on my mobile phone. I write the tasks there, and then I get notifications." kabi.

示例: I use a few methods to remember important things. First, I use the reminder app on my mobile phone. I write the tasks there, and then I get notifications.

× if it's important something, it's piece of cake for me to memorize it and remember it

✓ if it's something important, it's a piece of cake for me to memorize it and remember it

The adjective 'important' should come before the noun 'something' to form the correct phrase 'something important'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'piece of cake' because it is a singular countable noun.

× it's piece of cake for me to memorize it and remember it

✓ it's a piece of cake for me to memorize it and remember it

The phrase 'piece of cake' is a singular countable noun phrase and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× but if. It is small things I. DA.

✓ but if it is small things, I don't remember them well.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb to convey the intended meaning.

× once I have forgotten that I have an exam that day

✓ once I forgot that I had an exam that day

When referring to a past event, the simple past tense 'forgot' and 'had' should be used instead of present perfect 'have forgotten' and present 'have'.

× my friend called me in the morning and told me that we had an exam and I woke up then went.

✓ my friend called me in the morning and told me that we had an exam, so I woke up and went.

The sentence needs a conjunction 'so' to connect the cause and effect properly. Also, 'then went' is incomplete; it should specify where the student went or be rephrased for clarity.

× I have to remember my players at university.

✓ I have to remember my papers at university.

The word 'players' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'papers' meaning exams or assignments. Also, 'at university' is correct preposition usage here.

× It was silly icing, but sometimes I can forget that I have a payers or an exam, so yes.

✓ It was silly, but sometimes I can forget that I have papers or an exam, so yes.

The phrase 'silly icing' is incorrect; likely intended 'silly'. Also, 'payers' is a misspelling of 'papers'. The sentence needs correction for clarity and correct word choice.

× I have a few options to remember things. The first is reminder app in my mobile phone.

✓ I have a few options to remember things. The first is a reminder app on my mobile phone.

The article 'a' is needed before 'reminder app' as it is singular countable noun. The correct preposition is 'on' for devices like mobile phones.

× So I right here then the notifications came to the phone.

✓ So I write here, then the notifications come to the phone.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. Since the student is describing a habitual action, present tense 'write' and 'come' should be used instead of past tense 'came'. Also, 'right' is a misspelling of 'write'.