记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, before exams, I can usually recall important knowledge clearly. Additionally, I have vivid memories from my childhood, which shows my strong memory skills.

建议: Your answer should be more precise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I often forget my keys or phone when I go out, which is quite frustrating. This usually happens because I am distracted or in a hurry.

建议: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Begin with a direct answer, then provide specific details. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

示例: As a high school student, I need to remember important details from my classes. This helps me understand the material better and perform well in exams. Therefore, I focus on recalling key points and concepts daily.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear structure. Use specific examples and linking words to explain your methods of remembering important things.

示例: I usually remember important things by making lists or setting reminders on my phone. For example, before going out, I check if I have my keys and phone. This helps me avoid forgetting essential items.

× Of course, before the exam are usually can remember very clearly about the knowledge and some anything else.

✓ Of course, before the exam, I can usually remember the knowledge and some other things very clearly.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subject. 'Are usually can remember' is ungrammatical. The subject 'I' is missing before the verb. Also, 'some anything else' is incorrect; 'some other things' is appropriate. The sentence structure needs to be corrected to subject + modal verb + main verb + object.

× Of course, before the exam are usually can remember very clearly about the knowledge and some anything else.

✓ Of course, before the exam, I can usually remember the knowledge and some other things very clearly.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'remember'. We say 'remember something' not 'remember about something'. Removing 'about' makes the sentence correct.

× And also I can remember some memory when I was a kid, it's very clearly.

✓ Also, I can remember some memories from when I was a kid very clearly.

The phrase 'some memory' is uncountable here; 'some memories' is better. 'When I was a kid' should be connected properly. The comma before 'it's very clearly' is incorrect; 'very clearly' should modify 'remember' and be placed accordingly. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, of course, but I think that is kind of like.

✓ Yes, of course, but I think that is kind of like that.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that' completes the phrase 'kind of like that' which is a common expression. However, this sentence is somewhat informal and vague but grammatically acceptable with the addition.

× Involuntary response because I always forgot my keys or my phone after I went out.

✓ It's an involuntary response because I always forget my keys or my phone after I go out.

The use of 'forgot' and 'went' is inconsistent with 'always' which indicates habitual action. Present simple tense 'forget' and 'go' should be used for habitual actions. Also, 'It's an involuntary response' is clearer.

× I need to remember very clearly every detail during the claws and I need to remember very clearly about the knowledge so that in order I can use it during the exam.

✓ I need to remember every detail very clearly during the class, and I need to remember the knowledge clearly so that I can use it during the exam.

'During the claws' is a typo; it should be 'during the class'. The phrase 'remember very clearly about the knowledge' is incorrect; 'remember the knowledge clearly' is correct. 'So that in order I can use it' is redundant; 'so that I can use it' suffices.

× How is interesting because sometimes when I was went out, I went to I forgot how to find the fun away.

✓ It's interesting because sometimes when I went out, I forgot how to find the fun way.

'How is interesting' is incorrect; 'It's interesting' is correct. 'When I was went out' is ungrammatical; 'when I went out' is correct. 'I went to I forgot' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'I forgot'. 'Fun away' is likely a typo for 'fun way'.

× So I would start to find my phone.

✓ So I would start looking for my phone.

The phrase 'start to find' is less natural than 'start looking for' when referring to searching for something. 'Looking for' is the correct phrasal verb here.

× Then I will find Oh my God, I still I forgot to bring my phone number out.

✓ Then I would find, 'Oh my God, I still forgot to bring my phone out.'

The sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'I still I forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'I still forgot'. 'Phone number' is incorrect; it should be 'phone'. The sentence is better expressed as a thought or exclamation within quotes.

× So it's very hilarious.

✓ So it's very funny.

'Hilarious' is an adjective that usually describes something extremely funny, but 'very hilarious' is redundant because 'hilarious' already implies a high degree of funniness. 'Very funny' is more natural here.