记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'I forget things very easily' and 'I'm forgetting birthdays, anniversary's', you can combine these ideas more naturally. Also, be careful with plural forms and possessives, like 'anniversaries' instead of 'anniversary's'.

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, and I often forget important dates like birthdays and anniversaries, which my friends and family notice. However, I usually remember work-related tasks, such as deadlines or meetings with colleagues.

建议: Your answer is well-structured and clear, but try to use linking words to improve coherence, such as 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'very' multiple times; instead, use stronger adjectives. For example, 'which made me feel terrible' sounds better.

示例: Yes, I once completely forgot my anniversary because I was so busy with work that day, so it only occurred to me late in the evening, which made me feel terrible. Since then, I have become more organized and started writing important dates in my calendar to avoid forgetting them again.

建议: Your answer covers relevant details, but watch for singular/plural agreement and word choice, such as 'appointments' instead of 'appointment' and 'scheduled' instead of 'docked'. Also, use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: As a full-time working mom, I need to remember many important things related to both my job and family life. For example, at work, I have to keep track of deadlines, appointments with clients, and weekly update meetings with my team. Additionally, I must remember my child's scheduled vaccine dates.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, instead of saying 'the one thing that I do an which I find very helpful to write it down', say 'I find it helpful to write things down'. Also, use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to connect ideas.

示例: I used to struggle with remembering important things, so I find it helpful to write them down. I usually take notes on my phone because it's handy and convenient, which helps me remember tasks more easily.

× My friends and family are always complaining, I'm forgetting birthdays, anniversary's.

✓ My friends and family are always complaining that I'm forgetting birthdays and anniversaries.

The word 'anniversary's' is incorrectly used with an apostrophe, which indicates possession. The correct plural form is 'anniversaries' without an apostrophe. Also, the sentence structure needed a conjunction 'that' to connect the clauses properly.

× However, there are some important thing that I don't forget, specially things that are related to work, for example deadlines or if I have to meet Anna.

✓ However, there are some important things that I don't forget, especially things that are related to work, for example deadlines or if I have to meet Anna.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'some important'. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis.

× For instance, for work, I need to remember deadlines, appointment with my clients, weekly update meetings with my team to ensure everything runs smoothly.

✓ For instance, for work, I need to remember deadlines, appointments with my clients, and weekly update meetings with my team to ensure everything runs smoothly.

The word 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match the plural subject 'clients'. Also, adding 'and' before the last item improves sentence clarity.

× As a mother, I also have to be aware of my child's vaccine dates docked.

✓ As a mother, I also have to be aware of my child's vaccine dates.

The word 'docked' is incorrectly used and makes the sentence unclear. Removing 'docked' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I really struggled to remember important things. So to address that the one thing that I do an which I find very helpful to write it down in my notepad.

✓ I really struggle to remember important things. So to address that, the one thing that I do and find very helpful is to write it down in my notepad.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and structural errors. 'Struggled' should be present tense 'struggle' to match the context. The phrase 'an which' is incorrect; it should be 'and find'. Also, the sentence needs 'is' before 'to write' to be grammatically correct.