记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、"I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I want to improve so I don't forget important things."のように表現しましょう。

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I want to improve so I don't forget important information.

建议: 回答が断片的で意味が不明瞭です。文をつなげて、具体的に何を忘れたのかを明確に述べる必要があります。例えば、"Yes, I forgot to do my English homework yesterday, which was very important."のように表現しましょう。

示例: Yes, I forgot to do my English homework yesterday, which was very important.

建议: 回答が意味不明で文法的にも誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、日常生活で覚えておくべき具体的なことを述べる必要があります。例えば、"I need to remember to clean my room every day because I am not good at keeping it tidy."のように表現しましょう。

示例: I need to remember to clean my room every day because I am not good at keeping it tidy.

建议: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。重要なことをどのように記録し、思い出すかを明確に述べる必要があります。例えば、"I write important things in my notebook and review them often to remember."のように表現しましょう。

示例: I write important things in my notebook and review them often to remember.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I want to improve the skills not to forget. Important things.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I want to improve my skills so that I don't forget important things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection between ideas. 'Improve the skills not to forget. Important things.' is incomplete and unclear. The correction connects the ideas properly using 'so that' and combines the fragments into a coherent sentence.

× Yes, I have. Yesterday I forgot doing my English homework, so that is very. Important. Home lock.

✓ Yes, I have. Yesterday I forgot to do my English homework, so that was very important.

The phrase 'forgot doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forgot to do' when referring to neglecting an action. Also, 'so that is very. Important. Home lock.' is fragmented and unclear. The correction fixes the verb form and removes unclear fragments, making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I need to remember to clean my dream big 'cause I am not good at keeping my loom TD.

✓ I need to remember to clean my dream bag because I am not good at keeping my room tidy.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words ('dream big', 'loom TD'). These appear to be misheard or misspelled. The correction assumes the intended meaning is 'dream bag' and 'room tidy', making the sentence logical and grammatically correct.

× I remember important things by lighting it on my notebook.

✓ I remember important things by writing them in my notebook.

The phrase 'lighting it on my notebook' is incorrect and nonsensical. The correct preposition with 'write' is 'in' for notebooks, and 'lighting' is replaced with 'writing' to convey the intended meaning.

× I'm seeing my daughter book many times every day. And remember it.

✓ I read my daughter's book many times every day and remember it.

The phrase 'I'm seeing my daughter book' is incorrect; 'see' is not used for reading books. The correct verb is 'read' in the present simple tense to indicate habitual action. Also, combining the two sentences improves fluency.