记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
No, I'm not a good typer memorizing things, but I want the improve the skills not to forget important things.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Yes, I have. Yesterday I forgot to do my English homework. And I had trouble it.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
I need a 30 member to clean my room every day because I tend to get distracted easily.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I remember important things by. Lighting it on my notebook. I see my notebook many times per day and remember it.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。例えば、「typer」は誤用で、「good at memorising things」と言いたい場合は直接的に表現すべきです。また、文が冗長で意味が伝わりにくいので、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。
示例: No, I'm not good at memorising things, but I want to improve this skill so I don't forget important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「had trouble it」は不正確で、「had trouble because of it」などとする必要があります。より自然な表現を使い、理由や結果を詳しく述べると良いでしょう。
示例: Yes, I have. Yesterday, I forgot to do my English homework, and as a result, I had trouble understanding the next lesson.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 40.0建议: 回答が意味不明で文法的にも誤りがあります。「30 member」は不適切で、質問に対して具体的かつ関連性のある内容を答える必要があります。日常生活で覚えるべきことを明確に述べましょう。
示例: I need to remember to clean my room every day because I tend to get distracted easily.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 55.0建议: 文が断片的で不自然です。「Lighting it on my notebook」は誤りで、「Writing it in my notebook」が正しい表現です。文をつなげて、より流暢で論理的な回答を心がけましょう。
示例: I remember important things by writing them in my notebook. I look at my notebook many times a day to help me remember.
语法
× No, I'm not a good typer memorizing things, but I want the improve the skills not to forget important things.
✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things, but I want to improve my skills so I don't forget important things.
The phrase 'typer memorizing things' is incorrect; 'typer' is unrelated here. The correct expression is 'good at memorizing things'. Also, 'want the improve' should be 'want to improve'. The phrase 'not to forget important things' is better expressed as 'so I don't forget important things' to indicate purpose.
× Yes, I have. Yesterday I forgot to do my English homework. And I had trouble it.
✓ Yes, I have. Yesterday I forgot to do my English homework, and I had trouble with it.
The phrase 'had trouble it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'had trouble with it'. Also, joining the two sentences with a comma and 'and' improves sentence flow.
× I need a 30 member to clean my room every day because I tend to get distracted easily.
✓ I need someone to clean my room every day because I tend to get distracted easily.
'A 30 member' is incorrect; 'member' is countable and singular, but '30' is plural. The intended meaning is likely 'someone' or 'a person'. Therefore, 'I need someone to clean my room' is correct.
× I remember important things by. Lighting it on my notebook. I see my notebook many times per day and remember it.
✓ I remember important things by writing them in my notebook. I look at my notebook many times a day and remember them.
The phrase 'Lighting it on my notebook' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'writing'. Also, 'by.' is an incomplete phrase. 'I see my notebook many times per day' is better as 'I look at my notebook many times a day'. Pronouns should agree in number: 'things' with 'them'.
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