记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如重复使用“Yes”，句子结构不完整。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially when learning languages. For example, I break down English words into smaller meaningful parts, which helps me remember and recall them for a long time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“important invent”应为“important event”，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。

示例: No, I have never forgotten any important event because I associate things with my surroundings and small details, which helps me remember them for a long time.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“everything's”用法错误，句子不连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子表达。

示例: I need to remember many things in daily life. For example, when I go to the grocery store, I remember which products to buy. Also, when preparing for exams, I focus on remembering vocabulary and spelling. Additionally, I keep track of important dates and schedules.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并清楚地说明记忆方法。

示例: I use two methods to remember important things. First, I write notes on stickers and stick them on my computer screen. Second, I use the note feature on my phone to type important information and set reminders.

× I good at memorizing things, especially talking about the learning languages.

✓ I am good at memorizing things, especially when talking about learning languages.

句中缺少动词“am”，且“the learning languages”中“languages”前不需要定冠词“the”，应为复数形式。

× For example, for learning English, I'm good at memorizing vocabulary is because I can break the word down to meaningful small part to help me to memorize and recall for a long time.

✓ For example, when learning English, I'm good at memorizing vocabulary because I can break the words down into meaningful small parts to help me memorize and recall them for a long time.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词，且“word”应为复数“words”，“part”应为复数“parts”，动词“help me to memorize”中“to”可省略。

× No, I'm I've never forgotten any important invent, but because when I try to remember some things, I would like to associate the things with the environment and some small detailing things.

✓ No, I've never forgotten any important event, because when I try to remember some things, I like to associate them with the environment and some small details.

“invent”应为“event”，且“I'm I've”重复，应为“I've”。“would like to”在此处表达习惯动作应改为“like to”。

× So that will help me to this memory stay in my brain for alarm period and help me to remember them.

✓ So that will help this memory stay in my brain for a long period and help me remember them.

“help me to this memory stay”结构错误，应为“help this memory stay”。“alarm period”应为“a long period”。

× That I need to remember everything's.

✓ I need to remember everything.

“everything's”错误使用了所有格，应为“everything”。

× For example, when go to the grocery stores I need to remember which product I need to purchase.

✓ For example, when I go to the grocery store, I need to remember which products I need to purchase.

缺少主语“I”，且“grocery stores”应为单数“grocery store”或保持复数，且“product”应为复数“products”。

× Or when preparing for the elves examinations I need to remember the vocabulary spelling.

✓ Or when preparing for the IELTS examinations, I need to remember the vocabulary spelling.

“elves examinations”拼写错误，应为“IELTS examinations”。

× On the top of that I also need to remember the important dates for some important schedules like that.

✓ On top of that, I also need to remember important dates for some important schedules like that.

“On the top of that”应为“On top of that”，且“the important dates”前的定冠词可省略。

× Are you really use two methods to help me to remember things?

✓ I really use two methods to help me remember things.

句子结构错误，疑问句应改为陈述句，且“help me to remember”中“to”可省略。

× What is used? No stickers, I just write the impulse things and stick it on my computer screens to help me to remember the things.

✓ What I use are sticky notes. I just write important things and stick them on my computer screen to help me remember them.

“No stickers”表达不清，应为“sticky notes”。“impulse things”应为“important things”。“computer screens”应为单数“computer screen”，且代词应保持一致。

× The other one is used the I node features that in my cellphones aids can help you to type the important things and set another.

✓ The other one is using the iPhone features in my cellphone that can help me type important things and set reminders.

句子结构混乱，“used the I node features”应为“using the iPhone features”，“cellphones aids”应为“cellphone”，且代词应统一为“me”，最后“set another”不完整，应为“set reminders”。