记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples of memorization techniques.

示例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things. For example, when studying for exams, I use techniques like repetition and making associations. Additionally, I write examples that are closely related to the topics to help me remember better.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain the situation logically. Provide specific details about what happened and why you forgot.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, while working at a construction site, I was supposed to do a safety inspection of the labourers. However, I forgot because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks at the same time.

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using complete sentences and linking words. Be specific about your routine and explain how you manage your tasks.

示例: In daily life, it is important for me to remember the tasks I have to complete each day. Therefore, I make a list every morning of the tasks to be done. At the end of the day, I check my productivity based on that list.

建议: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about the apps or methods you use to remember important things.

示例: I usually make a list of important things using mobile applications and set reminders to help me remember daily tasks. After completing my day, I check the list to see what I have accomplished and assess my productivity.

× Yes, I consider myself a good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing things.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'good'. 'Good' is an adjective and does not require an article when used in this context. The correct phrase is 'consider myself good at memorizing things.'

× For example, when studying for exam I use techniques like reputations.

✓ For example, when studying for an exam I use techniques like repetitions.

The phrase 'for exam' is missing the article 'an' before 'exam'. Also, 'reputations' is incorrect; the intended word is 'repetitions'. The correct phrase is 'studying for an exam' and 'techniques like repetitions.'

× Ann. Making association SAN.

✓ I make associations as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems the student intended to say they make associations to help memorize. The corrected sentence is a complete and clear statement.

× I also write an example. Riches closely related to the. Things are.

✓ I also write examples closely related to the things.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a coherent statement, improving clarity and grammar.

× Once while working at construction site.

✓ Once, while working at a construction site,

The phrase is incomplete and missing articles. Adding 'a' before 'construction site' and commas improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I was supposed to do. Safety inspection. Of the laborers, but.

✓ I was supposed to do a safety inspection of the laborers, but

The original is fragmented. Combining the fragments into a single sentence with proper articles and structure improves readability.

× Aye. But our love it because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks.

✓ I missed it because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks.

The phrase 'our love it' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I missed it'. Correcting the pronouns and wording clarifies the sentence.

× In daily life. For me, it's important to remember the. Task I have to complete in my day-to-day basis.

✓ In daily life, for me, it's important to remember the tasks I have to complete on a day-to-day basis.

The original sentence has incorrect article usage and fragmented structure. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks', and 'on a day-to-day basis' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I make a list in the morning. What are the task to be completed in the day.

✓ I make a list in the morning of the tasks to be completed during the day.

The original sentences are fragmented and have subject-verb inversion errors. Combining into one sentence with correct word order improves clarity.

× In the end of the day an. I check my productivity according to that.

✓ At the end of the day, I check my productivity according to that.

The phrase 'In the end of the day an.' is fragmented and incorrect. 'At the end of the day' is the correct expression, and the sentence is completed properly.

× I usually make a list of important things in my mobile applications and set a reminders everyone are.

✓ I usually make a list of important things in my mobile applications and set reminders for everyone.

The article 'a' before 'reminders' is incorrect because 'reminders' is plural. Also, 'everyone are' is incorrect; it should be 'for everyone' or omitted depending on meaning.

× To remember the things what I have to do in the day-to-day basis and after the completion of my day.

✓ To remember the things I have to do on a day-to-day basis, and after completing my day,

The phrase 'things what I have to do' is incorrect; 'what' should be omitted. Also, 'in the day-to-day basis' should be 'on a day-to-day basis'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I just checked what are the things I have completed an check my productivity of the whole day.

✓ I just check what things I have completed and check my productivity for the whole day.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect word order. 'Checked' is changed to 'check' to maintain present tense, and 'an' is corrected to 'and'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.