记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 끊어져 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 주제 문장과 부연 설명을 명확히 하며, 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요.

示例: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things. However, I sometimes forget things that do not interest me, so I usually write memos to help me remember.

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함해 문장을 완성형으로 작성하고, 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어가세요.

示例: No, I have never forgotten anything important. If I think something is very important, I always make sure to remember it carefully.

建议: 답변이 문장이 단절되고 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 주제 문장을 명확히 하고, 구체적인 예시를 연결어와 함께 자연스럽게 나열하세요.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedules, birthdays of my loved ones, anniversaries, my own birthday, and other important commitments.

建议: 답변이 매우 단절되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 주제 문장을 명확히 하고, 사용하는 방법을 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 완성하세요.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down. I use two applications and also keep a notebook to help me stay organized.

× I think so, but sometimes I forgetting what I am not interested.

✓ I think so, but sometimes I forget what I am not interested in.

The verb 'forgetting' is incorrectly used here; the base form 'forget' should be used after 'sometimes I'. Also, the preposition 'in' is needed after 'interested' to complete the phrase correctly.

× So usually I have to. Write memo.

✓ So usually I have to write a memo.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Write memo' should be combined into one sentence with the auxiliary verb 'have to' and include the article 'a' before 'memo'.

× No, I didn't exactly.

✓ No, I haven't exactly.

The phrase 'didn't exactly' is incomplete and incorrect in this context. The present perfect 'haven't exactly' fits better to express experience up to now.

× If I think. Something is very important thing.

✓ If I think something is very important,

The sentence is fragmented and should be combined into a conditional clause without a period separating the parts.

× I never forgetting that.

✓ I never forget that.

The verb 'forgetting' is incorrectly used; the simple present 'forget' should be used here to express habitual action.

× Or I. Usually right.

✓ Or I usually write it down.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'write it down' clarifies the intended meaning and completes the sentence.

× Some my work schedules and.

✓ Some of my work schedules and

The phrase is missing the preposition 'of' after 'some' to correctly modify 'my work schedules'.

× Some birthday of my cherished peoples and.

✓ Some birthdays of my cherished people and

'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'some', and 'peoples' should be 'people' as 'peoples' refers to ethnic groups.

× Anniversary's and my birthday and.

✓ Anniversaries and my birthday and

'Anniversary's' is incorrect; it should be plural 'anniversaries' without an apostrophe.

× Some. Commitment.

✓ Some commitments.

'Commitment' should be plural 'commitments' to agree with 'some'.

× Writing an writing.

✓ Writing and writing.

The phrase 'an writing' is incorrect; 'and' should be used to connect the repeated word 'writing'.

× I writing.

✓ I am writing.

The verb 'writing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense.

× Used 2 application, an notebook an.

✓ I use two applications and a notebook.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper articles; 'Used' should be 'I use', '2' should be spelled out as 'two', and 'an notebook an' is incorrect; it should be 'a notebook'.

× Not an. Book An.

✓ Not a book.

The phrase 'Not an. Book An.' is incorrect; it should be 'Not a book' with the correct article 'a' before a consonant sound.