记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Améliorez la clarté et la cohérence de votre réponse en utilisant des phrases simples et directes. Évitez les répétitions et les expressions confuses. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase claire qui répond directement à la question, puis ajoutez un ou deux détails spécifiques pour expliquer votre réponse.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. Sometimes I remember important details, but other times I forget them easily. For example, I often forget where I put my keys.

建议: Clarifiez votre réponse en structurant vos phrases correctement et en évitant les erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre récit plus fluide et précis. Par exemple, commencez par répondre directement, puis racontez un exemple précis avec des détails clairs.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, I left my phone in the changing room while shopping. I tried on a new dress and forgot to take my phone with me when I left the store.

建议: Travaillez sur la clarté et la précision de vos phrases. Répondez directement à la question avec une phrase d'introduction claire, puis donnez des exemples spécifiques. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember where I put my belongings. To help me, I place noticeable items like money or big objects in specific places. This visual reminder helps me recall where I put things.

建议: Améliorez la structure de votre réponse en utilisant des phrases complètes et en évitant les erreurs grammaticales. Expliquez clairement vos méthodes pour vous souvenir des choses importantes, en utilisant des mots de liaison pour la cohérence.

示例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders on my phone. Also, my mother often helps me remember where I put things. These methods are very helpful, and I hope they will prevent me from forgetting important items.

× I'm gonna say that I am entering and terminate in like memories and things.

✓ I'm gonna say that I am entering and terminating in memories and things.

The verb 'terminate' should be in the present participle form 'terminating' to match the continuous tense structure 'am entering and terminating'. Using the base form 'terminate' here is incorrect.

× Even like some familiar things are implemented to me.

✓ Even some familiar things are imprinted on me.

The verb 'implemented' is incorrectly used here; the correct past participle is 'imprinted' to express that familiar things are fixed in memory. Also, the preposition 'to' should be 'on' to indicate something is impressed upon someone.

× I remember one time I forget my phone and left it in the changing room because I want to shop in and I enter some shop and I just edited try knew dress and I forget my phone there and just go outside the store and I definitely forgot about it.

✓ I remember one time I forgot my phone and left it in the changing room because I wanted to shop. I entered a shop and just tried on a new dress, and I forgot my phone there. Then I went outside the store and definitely forgot about it.

The verbs 'forget', 'want', 'enter', 'edited', 'try', 'knew', 'forget', and 'go' should be in the past tense to maintain consistency with the past event being described. Also, 'edited try knew dress' is incorrect and should be 'tried on a new dress'.

× I'm personally as someone who riffer get where they put settings so well.

✓ I'm personally someone who remembers well where they put things.

The phrase 'riffer get' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remembers'. Also, 'settings' should be 'things' to fit the context. The verb 'remembers' is in the present tense to describe a habitual action.

× When I want to remember what I put my things, I usually put a sign there.

✓ When I want to remember where I put my things, I usually put a sign there.

The preposition 'what' is incorrect here; it should be 'where' to indicate the location of the things. 'What' refers to objects, but the sentence is about location.

× I like I put like some money or something like big is visual, but and when I put it, I remember immediately like I like I really I do.

✓ I put some money or something big and visual, and when I put it, I remember immediately.

The sentence contains redundant and unclear pronouns and fillers like 'I like' and 'like I really I do'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Are usually remember it might important things from my mom or from my phone, because I usually know ties everything I put in my phone, but and my mom always I also Remember Me where I put things or I'm permission I forget and this method really really helps me and I hope the I will never forget things important.

✓ I usually remember important things from my mom or from my phone because I usually note everything I put in my phone. Also, my mom always reminds me where I put things if I forget, and this method really helps me. I hope I will never forget important things.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun errors and unclear phrases such as 'Are usually remember', 'know ties', 'Remember Me', and 'I'm permission'. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure are necessary for proper meaning and grammar.