记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在重复和语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议避免重复表达，注意句子结构，使回答更自然简洁。

示例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. My friends and family often say that I forget tasks they ask me to do, which shows my weak memory.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，准确表达事件的时间和结果，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, once I forgot the time of my Spanish mid-term exam, so I missed it and lost half of my final score.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有小错误。建议简化句子，注意单复数和冠词的使用，使表达更准确。

示例: As a college student, I need to remember my class schedule, homework deadlines, and exam dates. These are the most important things I have to keep in mind every day.

建议: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，表达不完整。建议练习连贯表达，明确说明使用的工具，并避免语法错误。

示例: I usually use a pen and paper or apps on my phone, like the calendar app, to jot down important things so I don't forget them.

× Frankly speaking, I think I'm not a good memorizer and.

✓ Frankly speaking, I think I'm not a good memorizer.

句子末尾多了一个连词“and”，导致句子结构不完整。应去掉“and”使句子完整。

× My friends and family always say that I'm bad at memorizing things because I always forget I always forget the things that they tell me to do and.

✓ My friends and family always say that I'm bad at memorizing things because I always forget the things that they tell me to do.

句子中重复了“I always forget”，且末尾多了连词“and”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除重复部分和多余的“and”。

× Yes, I had a bad experience of forgetting my Spanish. Class and during the middle mid term exam I forgot the time that the examination start and.

✓ Yes, I had a bad experience of forgetting my Spanish class, and during the midterm exam I forgot the time that the examination started.

“start”应使用过去时“started”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。句中“middle mid term exam”表达重复，应简化为“midterm exam”。

× I lost 50% of my final score because that may.

✓ I lost 50% of my final score because of that.

“because that may”表达不正确，应改为“because of that”表示原因。

× I have to remember the schedule of my classes and also the deadline of my home works or even the time of the examination.

✓ I have to remember the schedule of my classes and also the deadlines of my homework or even the time of the examination.

“home works”应为不可数名词“homework”，且“deadline”应使用复数“deadlines”以对应多个作业的截止时间。

× So I think that are probably the essentials that I have to remember in my daily life.

✓ So I think that these are probably the essentials that I have to remember in my daily life.

“that are”前缺少指示代词“these”，使句子不完整。

× I would usually use a pen and a. Paper or metal paper? Or the. Applications in my phone to help me remember important things, or even using the calendar app in the iPhone to record to jot down things that are really.

✓ I would usually use a pen and paper, or the applications on my phone to help me remember important things, even using the calendar app on the iPhone to jot down things that are really important.

句子中断断续续，存在不完整和重复表达。应合并句子，去除多余的疑问和断句，使表达连贯完整。