记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。可以先直接回答问题，再用具体细节支持。

示例: Yes, I used to be good at memorising things, especially when I was in junior high school. I could remember thousands of English words every day because I used techniques like repetition and association. However, now I mainly remember important phone numbers and dates of big events.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明。注意主谓一致和词汇的准确使用。

示例: Yes, I have definitely forgotten important information during exams, especially in subjects like history and physics. Since I am not very good at these subjects, it makes it difficult for me to perform well.

建议: 回答断断续续，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议用完整句子回答问题，注意句子连贯性和词汇准确性。

示例: In my daily life, I need to memorise formulas and theories because I major in mathematics. These theories are very important for my studies.

建议: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚，且有语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体方法举例说明。注意使用连词使句子更流畅。

示例: I remember important things by using techniques like repetition and association. For example, I associate formulas with familiar concepts to help me recall them more easily.

× I actually asked him used to be good at memory the things, especially when I was a junior high school, I can remembered thousands of English words everyday.

✓ I actually used to be good at memorizing things, especially when I was in junior high school. I could remember thousands of English words every day.

句中时态混乱，'asked him used to be'不合适，应使用过去习惯表达'used to be'。'can remembered'中动词时态错误，应为过去时'could remember'。此外，'memory the things'应改为动名词形式'memorizing things'。建议理清时态，使用正确的动词形式。

× Maybe because I have found the techniques in reputation association.

✓ Maybe because I have found the techniques in repetition and association.

原句中' reputation association'词语错误，应为'repetition and association'，表示记忆技巧中的重复和联想。预置词'in'使用正确，但词汇错误导致表达不清。建议注意词汇准确性。

× But now I'm really buy that memories of things is partially those phone numbers or the the days of big events.

✓ But now I really believe that memories of things are partially about phone numbers or the days of big events.

'I'm really buy'应为'I really believe'，表达现在的想法。'memories of things is'主谓不一致，'memories'为复数，谓语应为'are'。句子结构混乱，需调整。建议注意主谓一致和正确表达。

× I'll I have forgotten some key points and important information during exams like a history or the physics.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten some key points and important information during exams like history or physics.

'I'll I have forgotten'结构错误，应为肯定回答'Yes, I have forgotten'。'a history'和'the physics'中冠词使用错误，学科名称前一般不加冠词。建议注意冠词和句子结构。

× I'm really not good idea is still subject, so is making it very difficult for me to perform well in exam.

✓ I'm really not good at these subjects, so it makes it very difficult for me to perform well in exams.

'not good idea is still subject'表达混乱，应为'not good at these subjects'。'is making it'主语错误，应为'it makes'。'in exam'应为复数'exams'。建议理清表达，使用正确的介词和复数形式。

× In my daily life. I need to. Are memorize. Some formulas and theories because I majored in mathematics familiar and the theory is is very crucial in my studying life.

✓ In my daily life, I need to memorize some formulas and theories because I major in mathematics, and the theory is very crucial in my study life.

句子断裂，'Are memorize'错误，应为'to memorize'。'majored'时态不符，应为现在时'major'。'mathematics familiar'表达错误，应为'mathematics'。'studying life'应为'study life'。建议注意句子连贯和时态一致。

× How do you find it to remember some? Familiars and through his album. Use techniques like reputation and association.

✓ I find it helpful to remember some familiar things through albums. I use techniques like repetition and association.

原句结构混乱，疑问句和陈述句混合，表达不清。'Familiars'应为'adjectives'或' familiar things'。'reputation'应为'repetition'。建议理清句子结构，使用正确词汇。

× For example, the formula is. Uhm, can be associated to each other.

✓ For example, the formulas can be associated with each other.

'the formula is'后无谓语，句子不完整。'associated to'应为'associated with'。'formula'应为复数'formulas'，因为是相互关联。建议注意冠词使用和介词搭配。