记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。例えば、主語と動詞の一致、時制の統一に注意してください。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I prefer understanding concepts rather than memorising facts. For example, when I was in high school, I enjoyed math because it required logical thinking instead of memorisation.

建议: 文が断片的で意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接答え、具体的な状況を説明し、文をつなげる接続詞を使う練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, when I was a junior high school student, I forgot an important meeting and I apologized to my classmates afterwards.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して具体的に答え、日常生活で覚える必要があることを明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and tasks because I am not good at memorising things, so I often use a planner to help me.

建议: 回答がほとんど意味を成しておらず、内容が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接答え、具体的な方法を説明し、文を論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in a notebook or setting reminders on my phone. For example, when I study math, I make notes to help me recall formulas.

× No I'm not. I when I was a high school student.

✓ No, I'm not. When I was a high school student,

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. The phrase 'I when I was a high school student' is not a complete sentence. It should be restructured to 'When I was a high school student,' to form a proper clause.

× I like math because it is not needed. Memorizing things.

✓ I like math because it does not require memorizing things.

The original sentence incorrectly separates 'memorizing things' as a fragment. The phrase should be connected properly to express that math does not require memorizing things.

× So I don't like memorizing things, but I'd like something.

✓ So I don't like memorizing things, but I like other things.

The phrase 'I'd like something' is vague and incomplete. It should be clarified to 'I like other things' to make sense in context.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important when I.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'before' completes the thought appropriately.

× For example, when I was a junior high school student, I forgot. Important meeting.

✓ For example, when I was a junior high school student, I forgot an important meeting.

The phrase 'Important meeting' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence as 'I forgot an important meeting.'

× So I. Apologized my classmate.

✓ So I apologized to my classmate.

The verb 'apologize' requires the preposition 'to' before the person being apologized to.

× I need some concept to remember in my daily drive because I.

✓ I need some concepts to remember in my daily life because I

The phrase 'some concept' should be plural 'some concepts' to match the context, and 'daily drive' is incorrect; it should be 'daily life'. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× I'm not good at. And I'm not good at. Memorizing things so I have to. Memorized.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, so I have to memorize them.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. They should be combined into a complete sentence with correct verb forms.