记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Tu respuesta es un poco confusa y contiene errores gramaticales que afectan la claridad. Intenta usar oraciones más cortas y claras, y evita redundancias. Además, usa tiempos verbales correctos y vocabulario adecuado para expresar cambios en tus habilidades de memoria.

示例: I used to be very good at memorising things when I was a child, especially in primary school. However, nowadays I feel that my memory is not as sharp as before, but I try to keep it active by practicing regularly.

建议: Tu respuesta es clara pero tiene errores gramaticales y de vocabulario que dificultan la comprensión. Trabaja en la estructura de las oraciones y en la elección correcta de palabras para describir situaciones pasadas de manera precisa.

示例: Yes, last year I forgot my wedding anniversary, which was very embarrassing because my husband gave me beautiful flowers and a special gift, but I didn't have anything prepared for him.

建议: Tu respuesta es incompleta y contiene errores que afectan la claridad. Asegúrate de completar tus ideas y usar conectores para que la respuesta sea coherente y fluida. Además, revisa la pronunciación y ortografía de palabras clave.

示例: I have a very busy daily schedule because I need to remember my two children's different school appointments as well as my dental appointments. Therefore, I write everything down every day to stay organized.

建议: Tu respuesta es buena pero contiene errores de vocabulario y gramática que afectan la naturalidad. Usa términos correctos como 'notes' en lugar de 'blog nodes' y evita errores tipográficos para mejorar la claridad.

示例: I use a special calendar app on my phone to keep track of all my tasks. For example, I have one set of notes for work and another for my children. I write everything down daily so I don't forget anything.

× But now what day is I feel like my brain have loose a little bit of memorizing, but I try to keep it.

✓ But nowadays I feel like my brain has lost a little bit of memorizing ability, but I try to keep it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have' instead of 'has' for the singular subject 'brain' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'loose' is a misspelling of 'lose' and the phrase 'what day is' is incorrect and unnecessary. The verb tense should be present perfect 'has lost' to indicate a change over time. Suggestion: Use 'has' with singular subjects and correct spelling of 'lose'. Remove unnecessary phrases.

× Yes, I remember that last year I forgot my anniversary date with my husband which was very embarrassing for me because he was with amazing flowers an A special give an I haven't anything for him.

✓ Yes, I remember that last year I forgot my anniversary date with my husband, which was very embarrassing for me because he was with amazing flowers and a special gift, and I didn't have anything for him.

The sentence has several issues: 'an A special give' should be 'a special gift' (noun form and article usage). 'I haven't anything' is incorrect; the past tense 'didn't have' is appropriate here. Also, conjunctions and punctuation need correction. Suggestion: Use correct past tense forms and proper nouns with articles.

× I think that I have a very busy schedule because I have two children with different appointments at their schools every day.

✓ I think that I have a very busy schedule because I have two children who have different appointments at their schools every day.

The phrase 'two children with different appointments' is ambiguous. It is clearer to say 'children who have different appointments' to indicate possession of appointments. Suggestion: Use relative clauses to clarify relationships.

× As well as appointments at my dental office.

✓ As well as appointments at my dental office.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb, which is a sentence structure error rather than a preposition error. However, since only errors in the provided list are to be corrected, this is noted but not corrected here.

× So I ride it sound every day and I tried to.

✓ So I write it down every day and I try to.

The sentence contains misspellings and incomplete structure. 'ride it sound' should be 'write it down'. 'I tried to' is incomplete and should be 'I try to' to match present tense. Suggestion: Use correct spelling and complete sentences.

× For example, for my work I have a blog nodes and for my children I have another blog of nodes.

✓ For example, for my work I have blog notes and for my children I have another blog of notes.

The word 'nodes' is a misspelling of 'notes'. Also, 'blog notes' is more appropriate than 'blog nodes'. Suggestion: Correct spelling and use appropriate nouns.

× And I write it down every day and this way I don't forget a nub.

✓ And I write it down every day and this way I don't forget a thing.

The word 'nub' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a thing' to mean 'anything'. Suggestion: Use correct idiomatic expressions.