记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够流畅，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，避免断断续续的表达，同时增加具体细节来支持观点。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I find subjects like history and geography difficult because they require remembering many facts and dates, which I struggle with.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子衔接不够自然，有语法和表达错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确性，同时提供更具体的例子。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things like the passwords for my iPhone or iPad. To prevent this, I usually save them in an online memo app, so I can easily check them whenever I forget. I also write down important daily tasks to help me stay organized.

建议: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议先明确主题句，然后用完整句子详细说明，避免断句和语法错误。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember the schedule for walking my dog. For example, I walk my dog seven times a day with intervals in between, so I have to keep track to avoid repeating and wasting time.

建议: 回答简短且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用连贯的句子，详细说明使用方法，并举例说明。

示例: I use an online memo app to remember important things. For instance, I record exam dates, passwords, and important emails there, so I can easily access them when needed.

× I don't like the name. History on or geography this can of our subjects because I cannot.

✓ I don't like subjects like history or geography because I cannot.

这里'subjects'是复数形式，原句中使用了单数形式'name'，且句子结构混乱。应使用复数形式'subjects'来表示多个科目。

× Memorize the knowledge of it.

✓ Memorize the knowledge of them.

'it'指代复数的科目，应使用复数代词'them'。

× To avoid this problem. I usually record them in on line in my online memo app so I can easily check and then whenever I forget it says password.

✓ To avoid this problem, I usually record them online in my online memo app so I can easily check whenever I forget the password.

原句断句错误，且'it says password'表达不清，应合并句子并调整表达使其通顺。

× I usually record them in on line in my online memo app

✓ I usually record them online in my online memo app

'in on line'是错误的介词搭配，应使用副词'online'表示在线。

× I also write down important daily tasks such as date to hear me stay organized.

✓ I also write down important daily tasks such as dates to help me stay organized.

'date to hear me'是错误表达，应为'dates to help me'，使用正确的介词和动词搭配。

× When I walk the dogs like my dog, you need to work for seven interval.

✓ When I walk my dog, it needs to walk for seven intervals.

'dogs'和'my dog'不一致，且'interval'应为复数形式'intervals'。

× you need to work for seven interval.

✓ it needs to walk for seven intervals.

这里主语应是第三人称单数'dog'，代词应为'it'，且动词应为'walk'。

× In between each. Past so I need to remember to avoid repeat then to waste the time.

✓ In between each walk, so I need to remember to avoid repeating and wasting time.

'Past'用法错误，应为'walk'，且'repeat then to waste the time'表达不通顺，应改为'repeating and wasting time'。

× to avoid repeat then to waste the time.

✓ to avoid repeating and wasting time.

动词后应接动名词形式，故'repeat'和'waste'应改为'repeating'和'wasting'。

× some passwords or forms are the emails on it.

✓ some passwords or forms or emails on it.

'forms are the emails'表达错误，应为'forms or emails'，使用正确的并列连词。