记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid redundancy. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Sometimes I remember important details, but other times I forget them. To manage this, I usually make plans for the next day, like preparing a schedule for Wednesday, for example.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid short fragmented sentences and try to provide a complete, coherent response.

示例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always write things down. For example, I use paper notes or reminders on my smartphone or tablet to help me remember important tasks.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to directly answer the question with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks for different times of the day. For instance, in the morning, I prepare breakfast, and in the afternoon, I focus on work or study. In the evening, I usually relax or spend time with family.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and fragmented sentences. Use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down on a piece of paper or making notes on my phone. For example, I use the reminder app to keep track of important information.

× I sometime I remembers but sometime I forgot about something that happens.

✓ I sometimes remember but sometimes I forget about something that happens.

The verb 'remembers' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'remember'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Similarly, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I need 2 planes I need to make. A planes for tomorrow, for example, tomorrow is Wednesday, so.

✓ I need to make 2 plans. A plan for tomorrow, for example, tomorrow is Wednesday, so.

The word 'planes' is incorrectly used instead of 'plans'. 'Planes' refers to aircraft, while 'plans' refers to arrangements or intentions. Also, 'A planes' is incorrect; it should be 'A plan'.

× I need to write down on the paper.

✓ I need to write it down on the paper.

The phrase 'write down' is a phrasal verb that requires an object. The sentence lacks the object being written down, so 'it' is added for clarity.

× Or notice somewhere in my smart phone or tablet.

✓ Or note it somewhere in my smartphone or tablet.

The verb 'notice' is incorrectly used; 'note' is more appropriate for recording reminders. Also, 'smart phone' should be 'smartphone' as one word.

× To remind me about something that I need to do.

✓ To remind me about something I need to do.

The relative pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× I need to rememberer in my daily life is the morning.

✓ What I need to remember in my daily life is the morning.

'Rememberer' is not a correct form; the sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Afternoon and evening.

✓ Afternoon and evening as well.

The phrase is incomplete and needs to be connected to the previous sentence for clarity.

× So in the morning what? Should I do it or morning?

✓ So in the morning, what should I do?

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected to a proper question form.

× Yes, I make breakfast.

✓ Yes, I make breakfast.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× 4.

✓ For lunch.

The number '4' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'for'. It is corrected to the preposition 'for'.

× I remember important things by write down the important.

✓ I remember important things by writing down the important information.

After 'by', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. Also, 'write down' needs to be 'writing down' and 'information' is added for completeness.

× Information. Down on a piece of paper on note somewhere in my phone, for example in the reminder.

✓ I write down information on a piece of paper or note it somewhere in my phone, for example, in the reminder.

The original is fragmented and unclear; it is combined and restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.