记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a pretty memories”应为“pretty good memory”，以及“school license”表达不清。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并避免重复“sharp as sharp”。

示例: Yes, I used to have a pretty good memory when I was younger. For example, I could easily remember important facts or details from school lessons. However, recently I have noticed that my memory is not as sharp as before.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“have forgot”应为“have forgotten”，以及“on my”表达不完整。建议注意时态和句子完整性，同时可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but it doesn't happen very often because if I have something important to do, I usually set an alarm or reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

建议: 回答中有拼写错误，如“roaster”应为“roster”，句子结构混乱且表达不清。建议理清句子结构，使用正确单词，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I need to remember my work roster because sometimes I forget when I have to be at work. Besides that, I also need to remember the schedule of activities since I sometimes have to drop off or pick up my kids.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“Are you really a set alarm?”不合适。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰，并用连接词连接观点。

示例: I usually set an alarm or a reminder on my phone because it helps me remember important things easily. Besides, if something is really important, I repeat it a few times to remember it better.

× Yes, I used to have a pretty memories when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I used to have pretty good memories when I was younger.

这里的'memories'是复数，前面的形容词'pretty'需要修饰复数名词，应该加上形容词'good'来使表达完整且自然。原句中'pretty memories'搭配不当，导致表达不清晰。

× I could easily remember important facts or details from school license.

✓ I could easily remember important facts or details from school lessons.

原句中的'school license'用词错误，应该是'school lessons'（学校课程）。这是词汇搭配错误，属于介词短语使用不当。

× my memory is not sharp as sharp as before.

✓ my memory is not as sharp as before.

比较结构中，'not as sharp as'是正确表达，重复使用'sharp'是不必要且错误的。应去掉多余的'sharp'。

× Yes, I have forgot important things before, but it doesn't happen very often because if I have something important to do on my, I would usually set alarm or reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but it doesn't happen very often because if I have something important to do, I usually set an alarm or reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

'have forgot'应为现在完成时的正确形式'have forgotten'。此外，'on my'缺少名词，应删除或补充完整。

× if I have something important to do on my, I would usually set alarm or reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

✓ if I have something important to do, I usually set an alarm or reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

'on my'后缺少名词，导致介词使用错误，应删除或补充完整。

× I need to remember my work roaster because it happened to me too, not happening to know when I have to be at work.

✓ I need to remember my work roster because it happened to me too, not knowing when I have to be at work.

'roaster'拼写错误，应为'roster'。此外，'not happening to know'结构错误，应改为'not knowing'。

× Besides that, I need to remember the schedule of the activities because sometimes I need to drop the kid off of pick them up.

✓ Besides that, I need to remember the schedule of the activities because sometimes I need to drop the kids off or pick them up.

'drop the kid off of pick them up'中'of'使用错误，应为'or'连接两个动作。且'kid'应为复数形式'kids'。

× Sometimes I need to drop the kid off or pick them up.

✓ Sometimes I need to drop the kids off or pick them up.

'kid'应为复数形式'kids'，因为后文用'pick them up'，指代复数。

× Are you really a set alarm? An hour reminder on my phone because it helped me remember important things easily.

✓ I usually set an alarm or a reminder on my phone because it helps me remember important things easily.

原句结构混乱，'Are you really a set alarm?'无意义，应改为完整句子表达习惯用法。

× Besides, if something really important I will repeat it a few times. 2:00 so that I can remember it better.

✓ Besides, if something is really important, I will repeat it a few times so that I can remember it better.

缺少动词'is'，句子不完整。'2:00'无意义，应删除。连接词使用不当，需调整句子结构。