记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'remembering quickly and forgetting quickly'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can start with a direct response, then explain with reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things quickly. For instance, when I read something, I can recall it immediately, but unfortunately, I tend to forget it after a couple of days because my memory isn't very long-lasting.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly. Use simple sentences and provide specific examples if possible. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'which unfold me more love'.

示例: I usually remember important things because they are my daily priorities. However, I sometimes forget small details or less important memories that don't affect me much.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid listing without connection. Try to explain why these things are important to you.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my morning rituals, such as praying and going for a walk. After that, I focus on completing my schedule and achieving my daily targets because they help me stay productive.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express the idea clearly and directly. Use linking words to explain the method step by step.

示例: My mother taught me a good way to remember things. If I forget something important, I stay calm and try to recall the events in order, which usually helps me remember what I had forgotten.

× Like I if once I read I rapidly remember it and within two days I forget it.

✓ Like if I read something once, I rapidly remember it but within two days I forget it.

The original sentence has an incorrect structure and word order, making it unclear. The phrase 'Like I if once I read' is confusing. Correcting it to 'Like if I read something once' clarifies the meaning and uses the present simple tense appropriately.

× So I have this memory power of remembering it quickly and forgetting it quickly.

✓ So I have this memory power of remembering things quickly and forgetting them quickly.

The use of 'it' is unclear because it refers to multiple things. Replacing 'it' with 'things' and 'them' clarifies the meaning and corrects the article usage.

× I don't have that long lasting memory term that I will remember forever.

✓ I don't have that long-lasting memory that I will remember forever.

The phrase 'memory term' is incorrect; 'memory' alone suffices. Also, 'long lasting' should be hyphenated as 'long-lasting' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× The thing started important are my priority in daily basis, so I never forget which things are important to me.

✓ The things that are important are my priority on a daily basis, so I never forget which things are important to me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words. 'The thing started important' is incorrect; it should be 'The things that are important'. Also, 'in daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'.

× But some unnecessary things I forget our memories, I forget which unfold me more love.

✓ But I forget some unnecessary things and memories; I forget what brings me more love.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'our' and has unclear phrasing 'which unfold me more love'. Correcting pronouns and rephrasing improves clarity.

× In my daily life I need to remember I have to complete my morning rituals, then pray God, then get to walk, complete my schedule and a target.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my morning rituals, then pray to God, then go for a walk, complete my schedule, and achieve my targets.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and missing prepositions. 'Pray God' should be 'pray to God', 'get to walk' should be 'go for a walk', and 'a target' should be plural or specified. Adding commas improves readability.

× My mom's are just need this best way that if you forgot something and you want to remember it back, stay calm for awhile and focus on few minutes before what you did in sequence wise then you will get what you wanted to say or what you have forgot.

✓ My mom just needs this best way: if you forget something and want to remember it, stay calm for a while and focus for a few minutes on what you did in sequence; then you will recall what you wanted to say or what you have forgotten.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect possessive 'mom's', verb form 'forgot' instead of 'forget', missing articles 'a while', 'a few minutes', and awkward phrasing 'focus on few minutes before what you did in sequence wise'. Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.