记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how you manage memorising tasks using tools like Google Calendar.

示例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things naturally. Therefore, I rely on Google Calendar to organise my daily schedule, which helps me keep track of my tasks effectively.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas in complete sentences and use linking words to explain the situation clearly. Also, be specific about what you forgot and how it affected you.

示例: Yes, when I was a child, I often forgot important dates like birthdays. This made me feel guilty because I would have to apologise to my family members for forgetting special occasions.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use clear and complete sentences, and provide specific examples of daily tasks you remember. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember household chores such as locking the doors and preparing dinner for my family. It is my responsibility to take care of them, and I find it rewarding.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain clearly how you use tools like Google Calendar and alarms to remember important tasks.

示例: I usually use Google Calendar, which is a convenient app for scheduling. I also set alarms to remind me of important tasks throughout the day.

× I don't consider myself at a person who have.

✓ I don't consider myself a person who has.

The phrase 'at a person' is incorrect; it should be 'a person'. Also, 'who have' is incorrect because 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject.

× A good memorizing skill.

✓ Good memorising skills.

'A good memorizing skill' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Memorising' is the British spelling, and 'skills' should be plural to refer to the ability in general.

× In Daddy day I have to set my schedule at UM Google Calendar apps so.

✓ Every day I have to set my schedule on the Google Calendar app.

'In Daddy day' is incorrect; it should be 'Every day'. Also, 'set my schedule at UM Google Calendar apps' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and 'app' should be singular if referring to one application.

× Well this because I have to match the works in my diary, so this is a good way for me to.

✓ Well, this is because I have to match the work in my diary, so this is a good way for me to do it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb in the last part. 'Works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here. Adding 'do it' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× After I said remember when I was a kid I have used to forget the my multiple day so.

✓ I remember when I was a kid, I used to forget many days.

'After I said remember' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Have used to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'used to' for past habits. 'The my multiple day' is ungrammatical; 'many days' is appropriate.

× Which made me very gutian.

✓ Which made me very guilty.

'Gutian' is not an English word; the correct adjective is 'guilty' to express feeling bad about forgetting.

× I mean that if apologizing for her to her because I know it's a special day and I didn't want to upset her.

✓ I mean that I should apologise to her because I know it's a special day and I didn't want to upset her.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'If apologizing for her to her' is incorrect; it should be 'I should apologise to her'. The sentence is clarified and corrected for meaning and grammar.

× In my daily life, I need to memorize the household chores such as talking your doors or preparing dinner for my family members.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the household chores such as locking your doors or preparing dinner for my family members.

'Memorize' is less appropriate here; 'remember' fits better. 'Talking your doors' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'locking your doors'.

× And it is my responsibility to take care of my of my families and also I feel.

✓ And it is my responsibility to take care of my family, and I also feel that it is good for me.

'My of my families' is incorrect; it should be 'my family'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× It's good for me.

✓ It is good for me.

Contraction is acceptable in speech, but for clarity and formality, 'It is good for me' is better.

× I just take Gnosis or in the Google Calendar which is a conferable apps for everyone to note this schedule.

✓ I just take notes or use the Google Calendar, which is a convenient app for everyone to note their schedule.

'Take Gnosis' is incorrect; it should be 'take notes'. 'Conferable' is not a word; the correct adjective is 'convenient'. 'Apps' should be singular 'app' if referring to one application. 'This schedule' should be 'their schedule' for general reference.

× An also I usually set the o'clock to make me know that I have to do my target in the day.

✓ And also, I usually set the alarm to remind me that I have to do my tasks during the day.

'An also' is a misspelling of 'And also'. 'Set the o'clock' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set the alarm'. 'Make me know' is awkward; 'remind me' is better. 'My target in the day' is unclear; 'my tasks during the day' is clearer.