记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to provide a clear and grammatically correct response. Use the present simple tense for habits and avoid filler words like 'like'. For example, say 'I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget them after a short time.'

示例: I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget them after a short time.

建议: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed a dentist appointment, which made me feel bad because it caused problems for me.

建议: Be specific and clear about what you need to remember. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I need to remember my daily tasks and small chores because forgetting them can cause problems.'

示例: I need to remember my daily tasks and small chores because forgetting them can cause problems.

建议: Try to combine your ideas into one coherent sentence using linking words. For example, 'I usually write important things down in my notes or set reminders on my phone to help me remember.'

示例: I usually write important things down in my notes or set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

× I wouldn't say that I'm good at memorizing things because I always forgot it on like after awhile.

✓ I wouldn't say that I'm good at memorizing things because I always forget it after a while.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, 'on like after awhile' is awkward; 'after a while' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I often forgot something really important and once I forgot an appointment with the dentist ads and that really made me felt it wasn't really great person because I did a lot of mistake because of that.

✓ Yes, I often forget something really important and once I forgot an appointment with the dentist, and that really made me feel I wasn't a really great person because I made a lot of mistakes because of that.

The phrase 'often forgot' should be 'often forget' to indicate habitual action in present tense. 'Made me felt' is incorrect; 'made me feel' is correct because 'make' is followed by the base form of the verb. 'A lot of mistake' should be plural 'a lot of mistakes'. Also, 'dentist ads' seems incorrect; likely 'dentist' is intended.

× I will say I will need to remember my daddy and a little chores in my daily life because it if I didn't remember that, that that will cost me into trouble.

✓ I would say I need to remember my daily chores in my daily life because if I don't remember them, that will cause me trouble.

'My daddy' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. 'A little chores' is incorrect; 'a few chores' or just 'chores' is better. The sentence structure is confusing and contains redundant words like 'that that'. Also, 'cost me into trouble' is incorrect; 'cause me trouble' is the correct phrase. Pronouns should agree in number and clarity.

× Mostly I will write it down in my notes or on my phone. On my phone to remind myself.

✓ Mostly, I write it down in my notes or on my phone to remind myself.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here as the action is habitual, so present simple tense 'write' is appropriate. The second sentence fragment 'On my phone to remind myself.' is incomplete and should be combined with the first sentence for clarity.