记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและลดการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'For me' และ 'Personally' ที่มีความหมายใกล้เคียงกัน นอกจากนี้ ควรแก้ไขไวยากรณ์และคำผิด เช่น 'read a night before' ควรเป็น 'read the night before' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนขึ้นเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, before an exam, I usually study thoroughly the night before, which helps me achieve good grades consistently.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและลื่นไหล เช่น 'I usually don't forget important things because I always note them down in my phone's calendar, which reminds me of important meetings.' นอกจากนี้ ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำและเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมูรณ์ของประโยค

示例: I usually don't forget important things because I always note them down in my phone's calendar, which reminds me when I have important meetings.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงความชัดเจนและความสมบูรณ์ของประโยค รวมถึงแก้ไขคำผิดและคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'fielding' และ 'Ann' ที่ไม่ชัดเจน ควรใช้ประโยคที่สื่อความหมายตรงและมีโครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I need to remember simple things like my shopping list, homework, and projects from university.'

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember simple things such as my shopping list, homework assignments, and university projects.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'know down' ควรเป็น 'note down' และเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น เช่น 'I always note important things in my phone's calendar, which reminds me before the event.'

示例: I always note important things in my phone's calendar, so it reminds me when it's almost time for a meeting or task I have to attend.

× For me. Personally, I think I am good at memorizing things because.

✓ For me, personally, I think I am good at memorizing things because.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The period after 'For me' creates a sentence fragment. Combining the phrases with commas forms a complete and coherent sentence.

× before an exam, I always read a night before the exam and I can still get a good grade an get a high score.

✓ Before an exam, I always read the night before the exam and I can still get a good grade and get a high score.

The phrase 'read a night before' is incorrect; it should be 'read the night before' to specify the time. Also, 'an get' is a typo and should be 'and get'. The verb 'read' in this context is present tense habitual action, so it is acceptable.

× Not really I. Usually don't forget about something that is important because I always noted down on my calendar in my phone and it always remind me when I have a big important meeting too.

✓ Not really. I usually don't forget something important because I always note it down on my phone calendar and it always reminds me when I have a big important meeting too.

The original sentence has a misplaced 'I' and lacks proper sentence boundaries. 'Not really I.' is incorrect; it should be 'Not really.' Also, 'noted down' should be 'note down' to match present tense habitual action. 'Remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× It said.

✓ It does.

'It said' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'It does' to confirm the reminder function. 'Said' is past tense and does not fit here.

× In my daily life there are not much thing to remember, just a fielding for any simple like a list for shopping Ann.

✓ In my daily life, there are not many things to remember, just a feeling for something simple like a shopping list.

'Not much thing' is incorrect; 'thing' should be plural 'things' and 'much' should be 'many' for countable nouns. 'Fielding' is likely a typo for 'feeling'. 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'list'.

× A list of homework from my university. Elizabeth. Our project that I have to do.

✓ A list of homework from my university and our project that I have to do.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Elizabeth.' is likely an error or mishearing and is removed. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and structure.

× I always know down. The important thing in my phone?

✓ I always note down the important things in my phone.

'Know down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'note down'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. The question mark is inappropriate here.

× If it's a meeting or something that I have to do, I will. No doubt in my calendar and it will remind me when.

✓ If it's a meeting or something that I have to do, I will note it down in my calendar and it will remind me when.

The sentence is fragmented with misplaced periods. 'No doubt' is a mishearing of 'note down'. Correcting to 'note it down' and combining the sentence improves clarity.

× It is almost that time that I have to attend.

✓ It is almost time for me to attend.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Simplifying to 'It is almost time for me to attend' is clearer and grammatically correct.